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This story has been absolutely fantastic so far. I love all the details and explanations that go into the story and technicalities. The writing and translation has been great, although a more thorough editing could have been done as some Chinese lines have been left in. The characters could use more development, but in general I've been enjoying every chapter and can't wait to read more!
Very good, praying that Noel gets his menories later in the story when he’s the same strength as before. For the sake of the romance I like both character but I don’t like that she knows this whole other side of him.
Good one of the most face slapping and comedy novel I have ever seen
Sorry guys but i have no other way left so i deleted My old book and added chapter here sorry but now you can read the story here i haven't changed anything
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I rarely write reviews just by the name and synopsis and the fact that the author has over 700 days of writing stacked up just shows me this book is going to be fantastic I will write an update review after catching up to the current chapters!
Beautiful, well done, amazing, its honestly one of the best novels ive written and theres only like 9 chapters!! cant wait for moreee!!!!!!!!
Wow! I liked it alot! The characters feel *real*. Looking forward to reading more, and would recommend anyone who likes military, sci-fi or futuristic worlds to pick it up.Their lives feel full and kind of remind me of watching a movie - but one that I can't quite place. The pacing is gradual, fleshing out the history and surrounding world - can't wait for more! Only problem is... only 4 chapters? And it stops just when it's getting exciting :(
..................................................the synopsis is a wonder. it's interesting .nicely made, the story line. needs a little twist from my side. for the readers to be precise. but it's fairing nicely so far. keep it up .
Good story with great world building. I really like MC, his character, behavior and decisions.
If u like this genre u must read this. Interesting novel and the author is quite good. He happily accepts the feedbacks and gives quick response. For him every reader and their reviews are important.?
i first check other half system but then I switched this because it technical issues how can there are be some of they issued for this I guess.i like this novel
