Honestly, the narrative isn't particularly strong. The author attempts to inject humor, but unfortunately, throws in random, out-of-place tragic elements that disrupt the flow. The main character's annoying traits are off-putting, and the supporting characters are one-dimensional, dull, and lack any meaningful development. They function more as placeholders, quickly passing through the story without adding depth. Additionally, the writing, dialogue, and world-building together contribute to making it one of the poorest-quality stories available.
Why? What happened?
i hope he end up with ren too, cuz i like her more than amanda
I want to join a server, perhaps a discord server to discuss about this novel and to also keep track of updates. If you know one, pls let me know.
This aligns well with the summary and is quite intriguing. I'd genuinely like to rate it 5 stars, but there's room for improvement in the translation. While it's generally comprehensible, some parts feel like machine-translated text, particularly when it comes to character names – they're not presented in pinyin. Additionally, certain words, especially profanity, are translated literally instead of using their more common Western equivalents. Without a basic grasp of Chinese and familiarity with colloquial expressions, I'd find it quite confusing.
As others have pointed out, the translator frequently inserts personal remarks, which can be distracting but isn't unbearable, as it's a common practice in some Japanese novels. I can usually read selectively around those comments. The grammar and tense usage could use some work – there are instances where present tense is mistakenly used where past tense is needed.
In conclusion, the content is promising, but it desperately needs a thorough editing pass to enhance clarity and cohesion.
no, the only one is Adeshan.
This novel was amazing but the author got distracted by a different novel if I remember correctly and the updates that used to come out every four days started taking longer
mhmmmmmmmmmmm
Yes I totally agree with you! Let's have more people join it (⌐■_■)/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿
Thanks to the other person that wrote the comment below! Glad to know I can be of help to others~ (◍•ᴗ•◍)♡
New arc!!! Yay!!! (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ ﾐ ┻━┻
I skip directly where the latest manhwa. It was not explained that only unnecessary fat that get burned. It only say about body fat. If that was the case, it was probably translator problem
Good book dragged down by the update schedule, still managed to stack 50 chapters somehow