Nice work author, really love your plot and the way you describe your characters, really love the drama can’t wait to read more of your work good job. Nice work
haist! the things that love can make you do.
first impressions after reading the first 50 chapters. So far an interesting story about a man who 'accidentally' found a cultivation technique that allows him to live for a very long time. After a long time of cultivation and pushing earth technology to an higher from the shadows he is discovered by some powerful creatures who guide him to leave earth and go to a dimension where humans cultivate. He is 'guided' to join a sect and start his cultivation journey.I like that the story is told in a different way than the cultivation stories from Chinese writers (different pacing, different starting point and route towards the furst cultivation steps, etc) while still being a cultivation story. It gives the story a fresh feeling (starting as sci-fi and changing into cultivation in a way not seen very often). What I also like is that although the mc is starting out with the mc receiving all kinds of 'plot armor' and lucky encounters it is told in such a way that it is not just luck that will make the mc strong, he earns it with smart choices. And on this platform one of the best things I could say is that so far I haven't seen an 'idiotic young master' type of character (I hate those characters bc they often get themselves and their family killed for the dumbest of reasons. They are called cannon fodder for a reason but more often than not it doesn't do the image of the mc in the eyes of the reader much good. An antagonist who acts out of logical reasoning make the main character look better when he defeats them)Not everything is great but so far I have only found minor things and not things like where the story and character development breaks world building. Think of things like sound in space, small mistakes that are also often made in movies and animation. And another thing that sometimes can be better is the distinction between narrator and character. When is the narrator talking about the mc, when is the narrator talking in general. In other words small things that could often be fixed with a slight restructuring of some sentences or paragraphs.The story is interesting, plays out in an interesting world and told in an entertaining way. I hope it can hold this energy in later chapters too.
Posting my review again since my previous review is basically not visible to some of my reader friends. Anyways, I'm a long time webnovel reader of like 6 years and really liked the way this one has started off. Can't e bothered to recollect everything else I wrote the first time tbh, you see the 5 stars I gave it
if this is the second book, where is the first?
Review Updated: July 2nd, 2021.So yeah, only the first 20 chapters are free, but they are long in return (about 3k words on average, I'd say, double the average in most stories here), So you're getting a worth of some 40-50 chapters free. There used to be more chapters free but they were short and it seems like the author stuck them together into larger ones. I think it's good. It makes the readability smoother.It's a nice, underrated story. Not very typical for what we're used to seeing here on Webnovel, but there are lots of epic/creepy/emotional moments, and you can always learn something from its characters and their setting. This female MC is very well written (although acts a little dumb at first) but she's smart and brave overall. She starts a little weak but gets stronger as the story advances. She's interesting to follow, and some will find her relatable. So yeah, I recommend this story to everyone.(I really like how she looks on this infantile drawing. It's the author's cover :3)
It is quite a story with a unique idea so far it will be interesting to see how well the story goes especially how he gets his devil fruits .Hope we may see more
The manga for a beginner is a hard thing so I appreciate how you wrote it for your first time the only issues were the writing quality and maybe you could be more detailed but it’s my personal opinion of course but actually I enjoyed reading it so thanks for sacrificing your time for this, I wish you good luck in future!
I just read it.1. This is a great novel and one of the best so far2. Plz don't drop it author3. If anyone knows where I can find more chapters please tell me
Ceritanya keren, alurnya mengalir dan gramernya juga ok.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It's a slow going sci-fi, more of the star trek genre than the super fast video gamey sci-fi's you see on webnovel. However, the writing quality is good, so, you can read it fast. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.
Noice