Solid writing, grammar and updates so far. Not that many chapters and the story starts kind of slow, but so far it's been a good read. I'm looking forward to the future chapters the plot looks like its going to be interesting.
This is awesome.story i really like mysteries. All of is haves secrets and it was interesting to know and to read such kind of genre. This is different from others stories.. looking forward to this author
Terrible grammar. You need to edit your chapters, Or use a program to fix your grammar mistakes. No real world background. Pheonix empire? Dimension? No world? You said Pheonix Empire is a dimension? Did he destroy the whole Galaxy? Empire? World? The MC has never seen a genius like the one he currently possesses? He comes from a Celestial Empire. Also Is Willow State a villiage? State? City? According to you EVERYONE in Willow State knows him and he is well liked. While being a Mortal. I see that you mentioned that he lived in a City but never said the name of it or anything. You just said he is well liked by everyone in Willow State. Also how did Fenrir know that that was the same guy? If you reincarnate do you keep your old spirit if so how did he get a new one? Also many people don't know the secret of the two boulders but other people also tried it, does it mean they also meet the same spirit " Fenrir "? So just anyone grave robs people even level 7 cultivators lmao. Wang Xue wasn't even a cultivator. Seems like people are suprised over level 7 cultivators. I doubt the genius lover had anything good all they knew was that she had talent. MC breaks his morals and doesn't kill the girl. When did he pay 100 silver? It said that he paid 50 silver? He might be lying though but why would he lie to that girl. Also he let the girl stay in his room so much for a " Loner " " As this happens Wang Xue, who was hailed as the cruelest and bloody person in 3 dimensions. " " Everybody that had lost their lives in that world will not be able to find salvation and go through reincarnation, all of the souls that's present in the dimension when the cataclysm were all shattered whether it be those old monsters or the weak peasants' everyone was the same. " Yet he doesn't kill the girl. " Logic "
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a very interesting story from the start. makes me not hesitate to add to my reading list. I just read three chapters, I hope that in my spare time I can continue reading. because while honing my English too hehe. always success! I'm sorry I'm using google translate. maybe there are some strange words hehe
Interesting enough to be followed and makes on read more as the story develops. questions are popping up as one reads further. There are questions to the many-threading story as claimed since there seemed to be many stories all being developed along the way.
From what I read the mc is a smart and somewhat weird person, the system is kinda look the same as the system from Thriller Paradise. I think he can get abilities from different movies anime or stories,(Spoiler: He got the Ripple Technique from jojo bizare adventures). When doing missions MC usually use his brain to solve things. These missions is somewhat connected to the weird and un explained things that is happening around.I didn't know how to make a review I just typed what comes in my min (─.─||）
I rate 10 fluffs out of fluffJust for fluffOnly for fluffBecause all I appreciate is the fluffThis novel has got the fluff I live off the fluffCan’t get enough fluff For real though this novel gives me a real good laugh, sometimes I wonder if I could be like granddaddy paranoid but sadly reality has proven I can’t be. What else can I say except I am addicted to the fluff now.
I am particularly impressed with the unique progression of the Douluo Dalu series. Unlike 99% cultivation novels where technology and civilisation remains stagnant over millions of years, DD series provides clear civilisational progress every 10000 year. Story is a little repetitive but with its unique characteristics. The sci-fi and cultivation mix is very interesting
Good novel with great character development and world building. I will say so far is decent reading. the power system is kinda remind me of hunterxhunter? but a bit close to chakra. Keep up the good work.
First off , good wok author , I have been enjoying your story so far , only some place it confuses me , but thats something minor , at the latest chapter 52 you left me at a cliffhanger.. (angry face) hahaha but its good so far , really got confused in the last 3 chapters but i feel like ill know what has happened when reading the next chap. Hope it comes out aoon!!! Keep Up The Good Work!!
This is a good novel, but i got bored of it since there wasn't much action after he *SPOILERS*enters the new world ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------