Premise is fine but plot is rushed and very little is explained, everything goes downhill after the author introduces these two women who’s mere presence alone turns the mc into the biggest cuck you’ve ever seen. It is at that point in the story (around chapter 15-16) you start to notice the quality getting worse with the wish fulfillment from the author going through the roof. Nothing makes sense anymore and it’s best to stop reading. To gain a better understanding of just how bad it gets, read other negative reviews for more info, when it comes to this story I really couldn’t be bothered to write more than this.
This is a thot collector novel. MC: arrogant because he has repeated 10 thousand years of the same day, gaining skills and knowledges.Because of his arrogance he wants to collect the “hottest” girls knowing that he’ll offend a lot of people while doing so. he also acts mysterious while displaying his skills that he gain in those 10 thousand years.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hello author here, I would like to tell you guys that this novel won't be updated constantly because of my current situation(modules) so I hope you can wait or just drop this one. Also just some heads up that there'll be plenty of deaths around the mc so don't get too attached to them
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Actually This novel is not a bad or outright ****y , it's just that this novel doesn't have anything new . Some Godking die by betrayal then swears to kill , reincarnated , underestimated , stuck up arrogant young master, face slapping and repeat . Old things in new package , that's your cultivation novel in nutshell.?? Thank me later.
The ideas and world building were top-notched. You have such a creative imagination to make a good novel like this. With more exposure, this will become big. I like the characters and the plot. Also the flow was stable, not a bumpy ride for me ? Kudos! and good job!
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The prologue created a nice atmosphere and also delivered a nice background as to what the story's gonna be. The author has exceptionally succeeded to raise my curiosity. So I hope he rolls out the later chapters fast....
Hey Webnovelist!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected] are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
The writing quality of the story is probaly the main thing giving it a lower score. It is understandable as in guessing it isnt the authors first language, and it is one of his first works which will result in him not knowing a much descriptive words etc.If the author needs it i can proofread his chapters and rewrite certain paragraphs where i need to. I dont have much experience execpt for about 40 chapters of My vampire system (first 40-50 chaps). Just respond to this review with your discord (Username or server code) or something along those lines where i can give you an example of a paragraph i would rewrite.
I love the amount of details during the gamble. Even though it took a few chapters to cover. But I think it's important to the story plot such that it adds a realistic point of view of what makes us human. Human by nature are curious creature, but we are also very greedy. Only a few are able to control that. I love how the author shows the danger of wanting more (greed) using gambling as the beginning centerpiece to the story. While reading, I feel the emotional and physical toil that jose feel. It's very personal. Yes, even if you have a job it's doesn't guarantee one's success. As for boss yanlei, damn, I wanna smack so bad! I really hate him! The author did a good job in making his character (thump up) However, with the main character being Allaine Monillas I feel like not much of him is being shown yet. But the first few chapters so far does set a good foundation (setting) for the plot. Will be expecting more of him in the next coming chapters.