This story is unique. The idea is pretty interesting. And the story development is not slow or fast. It is readable and intriguing. With every chapter, things are getting more intriguing.
(This may be a long review)Story:Great! It's quite interesting and the war(s) are simply beautiful. The MC in the beginning (the few chapters) is cute and innocent, but you'll see her scheming mind very soon. The "acting to be godfather" is hilarious. I recommend the author to continue write the funny parts.Update pace:Pls update about 5 chapters a day...(๑′°︿°๑) XDXD nah, I'm joking. The pace is great, but sometimes I really want the author to update 1000000 chapters today...Characters:Nice and wholesome. The MC treats her people like family, and I love it. Some book's MC just use their people, but Ain cares so much for them (later on).overall:You'll never get bored by reading this. They're are funny and easy to understand, with unexpected events happening (The God damn WAR). I love it!
Horror books are not really up to my league-so I don't know if I can review professionally. The book is good and detailed, yes, detailed, and I love detailed books. Kinds skipped some parts cuz i don't read gore, but this gives a wave of thrill in my system, kudos for that.
Really hope it's a good read ??? ... ... ...
More plot following villain MCs paired with yandere harems. To start this review off I'd like to say that I genuinely, from the bottom of my heart hate both harems and yanderes because they're lazy, uninteresting and gross.This novel isn't a trashy power fantasy for some degenerate to self insert into, it's an absurd comedy that playfully messes around with popular novel tropes.It feels like the MC has a harem (fortunately it doesn't even feel like a harem as there has been no contrived romance so far) of clowns and I'm all for it. While all of these characters are stereotypes they're actually parodies of themselves. The situations that arise when these characters interact is basically all this novel has to offer and it is funny.So at the end of the day this is a fairly well executed gag novel that parodies old school Chinese MCs and their harems. Though this review is written about chapters 1-19 of the novel which is very early on so this could go either way, I just hope it stays on the gag route. 2.5/5.
I've read 74 chapters and I've like what I have read, the characters have personalities and the world has depth , plus no ntr. Please don't abandon this work author
It’s super good. I specificaly like their enemies and the world background. The author has a way with words that makes me so excited. I’ve been recommended this and it already has 40+ updates! Keep up the good work!
im at chapter 150 I like the story so far but one of the main reasons I started reading this novel is conquerer tag I hope we see some war and expansion soon because if you just keep writing on developing of the kingdom it will get boring bo matter how good you right it eventually people will get bored of it so I hope you keep in mind you need a balance between kingdombuilding and conquerer
man, i just wanna clarify things before reading any further..I'm stranded currently at chap 40 and all the novel showed was...how awesome, beautiful, and generous all the powerful women are and how stupid, pathetic and brain-dead all the powerful men are..how awesome the system is and how large our mc is dependent on the system and the women..how 60 percent of chapters could be filled with info abt a skill, testing the skill and all the backstories for every little things..and how often the mc tries to show him as a human who always takes the right decision and gives some justification for his every action,,like come on man, i get he is a goody two shoes to almost any women from the beginning already..may i know if he starts acting like any normal boy would in these situations and becomes independent once he becomes an adult?
First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read.The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels. I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.
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