świetna pierwsza część , druga zapewne też . ile rozdziałów planujesz i czy będziesz kontynuować ?
came from your over novel thinking lightning can't strike twice. You proved me wrong. His Soul spirit is truly unique and has much potential. Makes me excited for the future of this novel. Good Work Author.
I found little to no typos. The writing is clear and easy to understand.The world is interesting, there is a sense of discovery.The characters feel real. There is clear character development that I hope to see even more of in the future.I found the story to be engaging and fun. There is a certain amount of suspense that keeps me on edge and wanting for the next chapter.The chapters could be a bit longer.All in all, I'd definitely suggest anyone who likes this genre to give this story a try.
The author writes some pedophilic stuff early on and it just feels really weird.............................................................
I like the whole farming system troupe but executed way too poorly sadly. The characters and story lack depth and ultimately it feels too unrealistic.
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