This fanfic is greater but it's no for me, yeah I like opmc and when I see the synopsis I was catch by it but the 4th chapter began to downfall for me, because. the "mc" gave both of his parent the future of him and making them know who he was. and it was huge turn off for me because why would he do that? because it's his parents? well he could just make both of them safe right? so why would he do that? there will be no time paradox because he controlled time itself, so he can secure that his other of him will not have a system, because he is "one" or Omnipresent you might say.the 3rd chapter was good because he become omnipotent being, he became the strongest being in the story so it will become good but.... it ruined for me I don't know if you guys like it.{[This is just my Opinion]}
Mannnnnnnnn bro I love my little brother ?, I wonder how he makes so much chapters tho. Making DC, CO, ICS, and now this???? Either way, This book’s lookin good so far. ???
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read about 100 chs have say the core concept of novel is great but sadly the writer sidelines it rather write 60-80% about how chi na no.1 or how it's culture is the greatest or the classic ch ina being the victim in every case while rest of the world are the bad guys and in most cases the relatives of the dea d are the typical ch inese people only caring about money they can gain from the dea d guy(truth about ch inese society nowdays)do give it a try as gain the core concept of the novel is very enjoyable to read hope they make similar versions of this just not like this one to increase their social credit scores but rather for the sake of writing a novel and focus more than people (cast) involved then shout CCP great
I greatly enjoyed this book so far. It is different from the usual Cultivation novels and overused plot lines. Good to see something new and interesting.
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Look the story was good but the title was differ from the summons. He summon different species not elves only. It a great story have similarity or maybe Chinese counterfeit.
Hey~ I just started your novel and I’m loving it!!! So far so good? Can’t wait to continue reading. All the best?.
Overall if you looking for the equivalent to fast food, this is fine. There is lots of power fantasy, future knowledge, super strong follower and no mishaps. 21 chapters in, the writing quality pretty decent but marked low by the constant loopholes/plot armor. The MC goes from being a frail/dumb/cowardly character to a untouchable god(due to constant plot armor/who is lead by a slavelike/fanboy demon he got from his gambling system(even though gluttony has nothing to do with gambling/minions).
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