Voidmonktui
There is a repetition of chapters for chapter 706 and 706, and a lot of chapters are missing around chapter 764
I just hate the way it keeps on repeating. Anyways, Just my own opinion don't mind it.
+ Young years were an awesome read
+ I liked the way the MC behaved towards others
- The romance is slightly off
- Ending was mid compared to the earlier half
There is also a manwha of this, although I'm not sure if it's completed.
If you feel this isn't for you, consider reading other works of Tang Jia San Shao like douluo dalu
7/10
I counted the chapters and disregarded the repeating title this is what I got... since they said that there'ss only 149 chapters in the MTL i only noted down until 149chapter 1 - transmigrationchapter 10 - not enoughchapter 20 - sun qinchapter 30 - keeping distancechapter 40 - lady chenchapter 50 - dont give gifts, just give moneychapter 60 - Sharing a bowl of porridge and whatnot is very loving! chapter 70 - President Chen Boyfriend Power Explosion chapter 80 - Just Like A Couple chapter 90 - Divorce contractchapter 100 - chapter 110 - chapter 120 - chapter 130 - chapter 140 - chapter 149 -
luv this story, luv what youv've been doing. I look forward to every chapter, it keeps me constantly refreshing the phone everyday to see if a new chapter has dropped yet lol. I would definitely, and highly recommend this gem, to other readers who are fans of a good cultivation story.
for the sake of my sanity, tell me , is xylon ever going to love his harem(more persistently Eva ) .if not tell me now , because i just don't want to be tormented forever ...
I read about 60 chapter, in the beginning its good, but the system explanation and the goddess part ruin it for me. The leveling part also not good, he cant get xp unless its stronger ruin it( she cant get xp from savage beast even tough she is a savage beast), also she is only savage beast but she can defeat essence lord( power scaling is off), no explanation about how normal beast advance?are they also have level?
Such a good novel, sadly I can’t afford it anymore??
Our MC is the type of guy knows how to become a chūnibyō, and lean into that mindset for the sake of gaining more power and as it progresses, seemingly enjoy intentionally or maybe even subconciously acting out fantasy like Shonen trope settings in a semi familiar cultivation martial arts setting.The system is a fresh one quite an interesting take and the fact the current companion of the MC is a male and not a female is a difference we don't see much in cultivation novels.On top of the side character guy not being a fatty but somehow still being interesting and kinda funny to see on the ride along with the mc and just getting dragged into the flow of things and even enjoying it himself is fun to read, heck, he's even leveling up along with the mc, instead of being left behind to some extent.
I love the plot of the novel, it's very alluring and interesting.am waiting for the release of the novel...............................????????????????
To be honest, this a great work with potential but i still feel like somethings are missing. These are my opinions tho: Character development; This is a wizarding world, the character is a wizard and i don’t know what u have in plan for the mc’s character but his current character really ain’t satisfying. For a wizard, a dark wizard at that, i feel he is a bit too emotional than he is supposed to be. He has some subtle naivity( calm + curiosity could do the trick regarding his inspiration talent)which is not good for him as a dark wizard who is pursuing the ‘information manipulation path’. He lack the ruthlessness, calculative/ schemic mind required. His control over his emotions is also a bit lacking and his will is a bit too weak for an earthling who hold secrets hidden in his memories which he definetly cannot afford for others to see. Also, he lacks insights into the human heart and mind which is will be fatal to him if no change is made. With his knowledge of novels he read on eath he should know better than anyone the consequences of letting too much emotions affect his cause. As a dark wizard, his thirst for knowledge, rational thinking and spirit for reseach into the mysteries of the the multiverse is weak.It’d be cool if he had some time powers added to his rune tho.He could also create his own A.I to help with his informational path.Also, about his information manipulation and will path, you can gain insights from “ Cyher in marvel comics”, “ the middle chapters of the novel; ‘Original Seeker’ on comrademao.com or mtlnovel.com. Agian these are just my thoughts if you deem them useless for what you have in store for your work you can ignore it.
I picked this by chance to read about it and when i started reading it i realized i really enjoyed this. Though still i am only on chapter 47 I am excited to continue this till the end. This is not something I usually read and so far I recommend it
