I saw sport genre and instantly hooked! Author please publish more and more❤️?
Why the **** would the Author names this **** stain after cthulhu when the similarities between cthulhu and his jellyfish are worlds apart??? This mother****er is lightyears away from becoming even slightly similar to Cthulhu!! This BS is a allpostive beta ***** that is willing to accept his enemy that tried to fight him into his own horde of idiotic imbreds he calls allies! Plus, in no way does this dumbass MC act like a god! He couldn't even impersonate himself to be an old and omnipotent god (even if he don't know the workings of the world!)! IF ONLY HE ACTED LIKE KLEIN'S THE FOOL PERSONA (BUT HIS OWN GOD PERSONA)... Then, only then.. Will this garbage be worth reading
So far my favorite thing about this novel is the world building and characters. The relationships between Ivan and Enzo is very realistic and does not come off as fabricated. It really feels genuine. The little bit of exposition for Legends Reborn Online that the author throws in right from the start quickly gets you interested in reading more and more to find out more about this game. So many VRMMO books dont invest enough in creating a video game world that you would actually want to play in. This one does.
Story is good but PLEASE no harem. I am starting to see harem built up. We need a MC who don’t need to take in females every time he meets them. We need balance with males. Also, please make the MC smarter. He seem to always help woman or he has no knowledge of how his power may bring benefits to his enemies or catch too much attention. Basically he has no control whatsoever on his power and doesn’t seem to think deeply on people he takes in. Almost like picking up trashes along the way and somehow they are women. No offense.
I should first say that every 5 star review was either somebody saying dont read, something not related to the novel. And finally somebody who just read the title. This is not only a waste of time but degrades the value of time spent on it.Hasty with the rewards, uninteresting MC, and finally pathetic plot development and character introduction. Some how by walking down the street he looks like a nice vampire. Screw Off ! And while he is a vampire even before he sees any bad states of humans the narration praises humans with great Wisdom.This is a childish book.
A Cultivation novel written for six year olds. Posturing and wasting opportunities included. MC has a very low IQ and most decisions seem arbitrary.Why the author is so reluctant about killing while still doing it is a mystery to me. Seriously, an old and powerful Devil Cultivatior 'knocking out' an enemy and then leaving? Or did stabbing a downed enemy mean killing them. I don't know because the writer shyies away from actually writing about death and killing.My main complaint is about the way this book is written, not about the world building or characters (I have seen better, but it is webnovel, so my expectations are low). I won't be continuing, but a well done Manga might get my attention.
Hmmmm this is a pretty decent novel...... Though it makes the same mistake that’s pretty common in writing and publishing novels..... WE NEEEDDDD MASSS RELEASEEEEEEEEEEE....... even thou that’s that still ur doin a great job writing ? keep it up!!!!????????
Inconsistent at the start of the story you will get confused but only for a few chapter as the story progressed the mc background and character will be explained. So far no major plot armor or cringe mc. MC is hot blooded good type
Nothing, i said it ,no other novel can compare to this One, in its respective genre, the best of the best , my blessings to You, ✊?✊?✊?✊?✊?
True Space Mage is a rather refreshing story among all the copy-pasted web novels around. It tries to build its own unique world with lots of layers and mysteries, and it establishes a logical magic system that still allows endless possibilities. Truly a breath of fresh air if you're used to novels that keep reusing the same few settings over and over again.The main character, Aaron, also feels much more like a human than most protagonists. Despite his reincarnation advantages, there are always challenges waiting for him. He hesitates, makes mistakes, falls into slum**, and struggles against inner demons; through all of this, however, he slowly grows as a person and a mage.Sadly, while the ideas might be good, the actual writing... isn't. I'm not just talking about the technical aspects, the grammar, and whatnot (though a proofreader is definitely needed as well), but the overall plot and character development. It doesn't feel like the author has much of a plan, which ends up seriously harming the novel. It's what makes Aaron simultaneously one of the best and worst things about the story.As I said previously, Aaron's humanity makes him a compelling character, but only when the writer knows what they're doing. The problem here is that it's hard to get a good grasp on his character. He repeats mistakes even though he should have gotten over them already; he is supposed to be smart, but keeps getting dumbed down so that the plot moves in certain ways; he improves dramatically in many aspects, but still makes newbie blunders; his motivations are sometimes fuzzy and hard to understand.Many of these problems could be improved with forethought and planning. If say, character X (readers will know who I'm talking about) will be important in the future, then take some time to establish their relationship with Aaron; don't just suddenly add some drama involving X when neither the reader nor the main character has much reason to care about them. Maybe it makes sense in theory, but you need to *show* us these things, not just *tell* them. Give them more scenes, more characterization.Also, you need to give some thought to the main character's progression if you want to avoid testing the reader's patience. If he failed, learned his lesson, and became stronger, then move on. Don't keep retreading old ground unless you can add something genuinely new and interesting. Writing realistic, deeply flawed protagonists takes some serious writing skills, especially in a web novel, which we often read for easily digestible stories. So I would advise anyone to start ******.All in all, it could still be an enjoyable read for people who enjoy magic and worldbuilding. That's mostly what kept me hooked, at least. But the writing has much to improve and could hugely benefit from an editor, since the actual story falls short from what it could have been.
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Great story so far hop to see more. I hope everyone is doing great.Can't wait for more chapters to come out. I don't know who could handle everything he goes through.