it's nice to see a fellow Indian write a novel. Although the English is kinda poor at some points, it's understandable so I don't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.
The story has great potential, the authors writing style sure is creative and the flow is so natural through each read. And ofcoz there are few spelling errors but that's something that can be fixed. Overall this was a good read.
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With the time is running this book is going more interesting and I am enjoying it. Hey Emad...! Excellent job you are doing keep it up. Can you please tell us what will be the next step in this book
A stupid novel.1: HAREM (nonsensical harem with girls flocking to him)2: getting what he needs at the moment from random chest rewards.3: forced plot armors even though there was no need for them.4: forced fortuitous moments like finding a rare plant that just happened to mature when MC is there.5: Some people just having the talent/skills to heal or boost MC at critical moments when there was no mention of those skills before. It could have been a good novel, but author did not put in any effort.
The MC forms a team and the first member of that team is, in the words of the author "a legal loli" and it's creepy af. the author constantly sexualised the person who "looks like a 12 year old girl" and it's weird af
This novel is excellent and has potential. The world in this novel is ruled by women and the Mc isekai here. I wonder if he will be princess carried too. I'd love to see that. I also can't wait until the magic is shown, and perhaps the Mc can take down a dragon.
This is an incredibly well made novel so far. The characters feel real and are consistent, the world feels large and mysterious and most importantly, it is a fun read.
excellent job author you have created a proper story line with excellent background for the upcoming wars now you just have to make it to the future but am sure you have it covered.
The story is good. I like The protagonist very much. And I also like the Author -nim’s writing style. Please keep up the good work. I expect more from the Author -nim. Also I quite liked Astrophel.
I really, really, reallyyyyyyy love your stort author! I hope that you'll update more chapters of it. I can't get enough of this story. I'm waiting for their next adventures and how the story develops. Also, the character development of each of them. Love this story ❤️❣️
i really love the characteristic of mc and the fmc and the story is good/awesome