Worthy every payment
good story but the chapters are way too short making it hard to keep a good flow
A PAGE TURNER!!
Really good story I must commend.
Though it’s a fictional story there’s a human emotional side to it that makes you want to keep reading.
last update 2year ago!!! seriously...
would love to read this, but I want to know how often will u update... don't want to waste my time reading an incomplete book
82 chapters 5-27-23
Pls when are u going to update another chapter
Wow, I read every chapter twice before moving to the other, I love this one.
its more like hes forced to these bad deals, also he had to make these deals w/ counters to minimize the damage the bad deals he was forced to sign
I've already read up to chapter 200, and what bothers me about this novel is that the MC seems simply incapable of keeping his own secrets.
He goes out at night to do something dangerous and doesn't even have the awareness or ability to notice a bunch of children following him.
Another point that I find unpleasant in the story are the POV's of the other children, like Symon for example, for me he is the most uninteresting character in the entire work, he has no attitude, he doesn't respect the MC's secrets, he only serves to get beaten up, literally a walking, talking fodder.
This is my first time that I find MC of a novel completely unnecessary.
Side characters are more interesting tbh.
Also MC is a creepy p*rv*rt who take advantage of people's ignorance.
Yeah I stay away from anything vr related with immortal enemies. I need a sense of completion