Really interesting so far. It is still early for detailed review but one thing for sure is the couple has undeniable chemistry. Want more chapters!
Hi there, fellow daoists. Author here!This is my first story and i intend for it to be my best, so do not be easy on your reviews but do show some love once in a while.T.TIn any case, i've been hesitating on writing xuanhuans for two years now, and recently finally gained the courage to start. I shamelessly ask that you encourage meself by commenting on the chapters and giving heart felt reviews of the story, or support however you can and want. All is appreciated, Thank you very much for going on this journey with me.:PCordially, Author
Its interesting, but could have had more comedy??...but anyways its interesting, looking forward to more chapters .....the story line is Lit
Need more chapters ?? so bad dudee story has so much potential I don't know if orginal or translated but it needs more chapters my boy Ethan finally reached the village now what????? Mannn I can't wait for next part come soon me missing u
A relaxed dungeon crawling story. A good read for a chill time. Romance exists but is less in your face about it which is something I personally prefer.
Okay so... I need to read more but so far it is a very rough story. I'm two chapters in and there are already a ridiculous amount issues. Grammer for one, using male pronouns instead of female and confusing the reader is a big one. There are also already some plot issues I see on the horizon. Honestly, I think that the premise is good but it just needs more work and thought. Could also use someone to go through and help with grammar. I will try to continue and may update the review if there is any improvement in quality, character depth, or flow vs forced plot.
Pretty good read so far. Enjoyable and fun. It is still very early for a full review, but I have to say that it's looking really good so far. Well done author!
One day evil will spread in the fictional world as it prevailed in reality hahahaha good novel it was fun frankly, thanks for your hard work the most important thing is that the hero is evil, because it will cover the story Even if it's bad
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It's a wonderful novel and I very much appreciate it and I hope it will be a winner of spirity award contest and I also prayed for Mr Emad that your novel will be the winner of the spirity award contest
novel is quite interesting, the fact that he has a lot of clones that have conscience helps in making him more op. also i quite like his character, ruthless and domineering. he's a unique mc out of all the novels that I've read, since there were mc's out there who are also ruthless and domineering but these mc's rely on something that made them that way like for example, system cheats or some kind of powerful plot armor that changed their character in a not so understandable way, in short its illogical an example is when a a guy was suddenly reincarnated from modern society and has never seen any killings in his life was able to kill in cold blood and wpupd emit killing intent when he only killed a few people in the early chapters while in this novel it is well explained how he became ruthless and domineering ir tyranical in character. my only problem for this novel is the update stability so author is this still updating or is this dropped already?
The catchy plot is interesting to read through. The author made a unique story in a trapped-glitch game cliche that everyone should follow up and read every coming chapter