Im going to start now, i saw that there's not heavy romance ,so i expect a little... i hope i dont get disappointed T_T . Let's pray to the almighty for good romance
All I have to say is that this book is one of the best I’ve ever read, and I’ve been in the novel community since around 2018! Alright, now go read.Wait, why are you still here? *sigh*, fine, I’ll Do a comprehensive review…Writing Quality- The author has a perfect grasp of the English language, 10/10.Updating Stability- I usually give 5 stars for this category if it’s 7 or more chapters, but we get 14 daily chapters! 10(+10)/10.Story Development- Amazing, and the author’s tied up all loose ends with little to no plot holes! And the satisfaction of watching Gravis grow was great. 9/10, but since you can’t rate like that, I’ll round up to 10/10Character Design- 100/10, the characters are logical, they talk, act and feel like real people and they are amazing, one of the best parts of this book!World Background- Loved it, and everything was explained in heavy detail, you can tell the author spent a lot of time on it. 9/10.I love this WN and have been reading on a daily basis from ~chapter 700, so I may be a little biased….TL;DR: Character Design is its strong points, but everything else is amazing, and ________ (no spoilers!) was a great Antagonist
is a great story to read...only downside is there is not more chapters to read
This novel was reccomended to me by a friend of mine Murhpy and I must say I have no regrets. The story is great so far though I haven't gotten to the full on yandere quite yet I expect great things. Keep up the great work author.
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I mean so far it's ok, but his naive character annoys me. I understand that as someone from earth he is afraid of killing, but I don't think Veronica does any unjust killing. in this kind of might makes right world, if someone disrespects you no one will bat an eye if u kill them. He keeps talking about changing Veronica, but he is the one who has to change. also, is killing not part of his training as someone meant to protect Veronica? seriously man he has to accept the reality of the situation he seems like some kinda fairytale hero
Writing quality 4Story development 3Character design 2Updating stability- I guess it depends but I give a 3 stars.World backround 4.I'm not really an expert in terms of reviewing works but I'm still going to give my opinion?I guess.Writing Quality is decent and readable, although there's some grammatical errors It was still fine. I like the writing style based 1st person perspective so I give 4 stars.The story development for me is pretty off that's why I just gave 3 stars in this aspect. The story is very slow paced and It makes the reader feel bored. Me personally like slow pace to catch up the details and some stuffs. But slowing the progress too match will leave the bad taste to those people reading it. I highly suggest to learn how to control the pacing, Fast , Slow and etc to assure the reader is still in the story.Character development is really not good for my opinion. At first I thought he was just a chill guy wanting peace and sort of playing video games with his friend. But after some events it was highly showed the he is the most loser , beta mc that I've ever read in my whole life. His personality is really sucks like in a bad way that it affects the readers mind. His decision is hilarious to the point I want to beat him up. I think It's okay to make him like a average person....but too much and making him like a sore loser just holding the potential of the story. At first he was bullied so he will decide to change into a new different person but still after all the things happened he just become more and more trash. He was aware the fact his friend is having *** behind his back making fool of him. I like the idea that the mc didn't care but what did he do?He played with them like a fool and it really look like stupid in my opinion. I don't want to offend the author of this story but It's been a while since I became frustated at the stupidity of a person.He can just avoid talking with that so called friends of him especially Jet, this kid is not a friend at all. He was just acting and making fun of the mc behind the back and thinking how superior he is by doing malicious things with the girls that close to him. Ps: I'm not starting argument I'm just stating what I feel about the story so far so please go easy on me and don't take it as an personal insult. Everyone has the right to do what they want to do , right what they want and I really respect the efforts of the authors sharing their thoughts and imagination
I will follow u to death...just don't drop pleaseone of the best system novels I have ever read...I recommend this to everyone but those with weak hearts...there is an ntr tag for a reason.
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Great story so far. Looking forward to more, rated the world building at 4 because we still don't know much about it, but so far it's an amazing read with a unique view on the transmigration genre. The system, a.k.a. Lily, is great as well. Keep up the good work!