Wtf tho i thought this novel never gonna get an update anymore well MTL was devastating to read
I. love. this. book . I am a person that live to see character growth in a story .this book wonderfully played that out .this is a very very exciting and unique story especially in Chinese novels
Hi,
Everyone I hope you enjoy the it. Please go easy on me its my first time writing a novel so I will be making a lot of mistakes so I hope you bear with me. If there are any mistakes let me know.
Enjoy the Novel.
I read a few chapters and really liked the start, great storyline author, everything with demons and beasts is always great!!
Can't wait to read more!!
AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?
it's a first but it was good! I like the act of writing in first person perspective and the description was on a who picture scale. Author ? you've got to teach me some of your skills??
So far I really enjoyed this novel, the world is interresting and fun. Only the fights tend to dreg on and on, which can be boring.Overall pretty good novel.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Basically a ripoff of “Beginning after the end” some of the lines are the same he hes a black dragon he wore a mask when he was an adventurer and other stuff.
so this book has no description of almost anything you have to find out by yourself and again it just goes into situations without any build up or description.
So I came here for a review swap and wasn't sure what to expect going into this book. I recently got out of my Books with Systems phase and was quite tired of all the systems that were A) cute, fluffy but utterly useless and B) cold, mechanical, calculative and just using the mc for its gain (and the mc that is given no choice but to obey albeit unwilling). Imagine how elated I was when here comes a system that HELPS the mc. Even if Genesis doesn't give out impromptu missions like a game (I like this), just the originality of the borrowing system sold the story to me. Plot wise, I have nothing to say. 5 stars. The author was more focused on character development than world building in the first few chapters but luckily it didn't drag on for too long. Mysteries and more Genesis scenes prompted me to not skip-read, and I'm glad I didn't.The MC is smart, hilarious and the way his system functions is definitely the most unique one I have ever read. The only problem is sometimes the past and present tenses get mixed up and I get confused.All in all, this is an intriguing and interesting story. If the grammar errors can be corrected, I will rate it perfect stars. Best of luck author!
Its amazing, the story i read till now was amazing.. A thriller, a horror, a mystery, a love and lots of romance. I loved it........................