DammyDimples
I love the story and I am at chapter 45 so far which is the latest chapter at the moment, the story is developing pretty good and explanation is great although there are some very small grammar mistakes from time to time it doesn’t affect the quality of the story.
From OP to an average MC. How unique ? Usually, I see stories that have their characters start from weak to strong. This one seems to be quite interesting too even though that is not the case. Quite a unique character design indeed. The flow of the story and the pace are good so far. Hadn't read that much yet but I could already tell that this would be a fun ride! ?
Its pretty unique. Elf time
If you want to read something that's both interesting and mysterious then this is the novel for you.
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very good so far. hope it's one of the ones to go past 40 chapters..........................................................................
A very good novel. The power system is well explained, simple, and easy to remember. In additionally, there are clear boundaries of what the main character can and cannot do, which is needed to be mention because of certain novels out their. The main character is not all about face slapping, neither do they show off extremely crazily, at least from the chapters released. No nationalism or racism as of yet.
I am very sorry that my English grammar is very bad, and I am not fluent in many places, but I think the content of this novel is still very interesting, I hope you can read it
Indian culture based cultivation novel, a rare and interesting sight
As a casual reader I recommend this novel This is an unique and beautiful peace of artThe only problem is the World backgroundDon't ask me why
It's a story with potential. The pirates theme is very interesting and not something very explored. It's nice to see someone telling a story like that.Despite this, I believe that the author needed to make readers know the protagonist more. He spent many chapters explaining and showing the prison break and when he barely starts to show the mc path, his choices and personality construction... Locked Chapter. Most of what I saw was tragedy after tragedy happening in Shiro's life. For me, it needs more for people to decide whether or not to continue reading the story. Not much to say based on the free chapters. It just has a lot of potential. The world, the monsters, gods, powers, history... All of this can be very good but you couldn't see it in the 34 free chapters.I wish the author success on this journey. I hope you do a good job. Peace!
Got to say dude…im loving your book…and I’ve read a lot of them especially ones based on an apocalypse system…please keep it up!Also for anyone who is checking the reviews…read this book…its a solid one.
I like this story.
