the MC is garbage, he acts like a complete doormat and has pretty much no solid personality to speak of, his so called "companions" are just a ****ty fairy that treats him like crap and like the slave he is, while dodging any consequences and in fact getting rewarded for being ****ty, and a "sidekick" that's constantly getting influenced by the fairy to also treat him like ****. neither of their actions ever seem consistent or coherent and the fact that we're basically forced to watch this wimpy MC getting used for labor gets really old really fast. ALSO, his supposed "guide" consistently hides or conceals information and useful things from him simply because she "can" or because she's scheming behind his back. of course, the MC can or wont do anything about this so whats the point in reading this novel about a worthless character no one cares about being abused by other worthless characters no one else cares about.
It's such a great novel; feel in love with it. Hopefully you push thru and not drop this hidden gem...................................................................................................................................................
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Its too early for me to give it a true rating but as of right now i absolutely love this and the world background is amazing! And a tiny spoiler, this novel makes the use of systems so REALISTIC!!!! Thats what i love the most about this.
A lame novel with idiotic characters lameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
The writing quality is really great and the action is well written. I'm excited to see what kind of character the MC creates next! Also, the world building is fleshed out really well. Great work!
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Preety good, cant wait for them to become the vampire squad
This is a really enjoyable story so far with good grammar and writing quality. There is still a lot of mystery as to how the protagonist got to where he is, but it is slowly being revealed in a compelling manner rather than with info dumps like many other stories use.
It is a really good book. Very well written. Tme mc reincarnated but does not seem to have a cheat ability. The mc is not arrogant and looking to fight people at every turn. The mc is actually a rational human being.
This is very Good . .......................................................................................................................................
Your plot is interesting. Writing style is good and your choice of words is amazing. There are a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with proofreading. Keep writing!