Firstly, I should say that I love the story!!!!
I rarely read a story with less than 200 chapters, but this story just seemed so much fun.
It’s a light story of a girl with a faithful to her dream. It’s upbeat and so far it has avoided the intense drama, angst, and generalized killing of Dungeon stories. It reminds me a little of the mood of japanese adventurer light novels.
I have one complaint: 3 chapters a week is too few!!!! But no pressure, I keep counting the hours for the next chapter.
And I have a few doubts: why haven’t the army of the different countries of the world moved to take control of the resources of the maze? Who is in charge of the guild and how is it able to mantain itself independent from the government?
If I think of more questIons, I write later.
I didn't have much expectations based on the theme, but it really proved me wrong. It was amazing and both character and story development is going at exactly correct pace. love it...
I have not read a similar story before ????? .Everybody wants a superpower and nothing else is stronger than this.?????? keep it up
**Spoilers**It starts out slow but it's a good enough concept and story to keep you invest. More slice of life than I usually see in this type of story and I liked it. The romances are good and unique enough that they're interesting. Then he goes to another world and everyone I was starting to like and care about are gone. It feels like a bait and switch. I'm on ch 145 and based on the chapter titles (Past 180 at time of writing.) it doesn't look like he gets back to Earth any time soon. I was invested in characters that are just gone completely and I just can't bring myself to care. I might come back eventually but I'm moving on.
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I'm curious that there's little amount of people reading this masterpiece, it's a good kingdom building also has a decent MC to be hooked at.
*Does anyone know the name of this novel in Chinese/have a link to the raws please? :)* I'm absolutely loving this novel. Read all of the 60 chapters and it's hilarious. I just wish the MC was a bit luckier for himself other than kneeling though. Worth a read imo. There are also no characters I really dislike and the MC has a very good personality and his friends are likeable.
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences.The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!
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Title: 厉害了我的原始人/The Caveman Made Me AwesomeRating: 8.7(272)Chapters: 950(Ongoing)No. of works: 1Date: 2017/09Achievements: Got 100,000 collections.
Wow... truly fabulous.. its a roller coaster of journey of some beautiful ladies.. loved the way u wrote it.. keep going!! Loved the characters and the amazing plot!!