A well written upcoming book with a nice storyline…looking forward to more chapters..
The author is a master at description, making the readers feel and see the things happening in vivid details. If the updates were faster, the author stands a chance to become pretty famous.
Hi all. Author here, I have bad grammar and I know it. I just do what I want. If you have a high standard in grammar requirement then this novel not your cup of tea. You all free to critic. Critic will be appreciate and I love it. With critic, I will do better for next chapter. Of course there might be a hiatus of this novel. So don't put your hope up for daily updates and the continuation of this novel.
Is this ongoing, theres only about 60 chapters so far & its been a while since the release.I'm kind of dissapointed in webnovel for advetising novels that doesn't go over the initial 60 chapters. :/
So... like, the story basically fails it's starting premise. Ht idea of drawing upon different selves is a cool one, but that basically only happens once, with a single other self. After that, all his abilities come from doing the megaman, and they just feel... flavorless. Like, It could be spells, or chi, or psychic powers, or whatever... it wouldn't make a difference, because the powers don't feel like anything. They don't have any character.He could have a generic system, and it wouldn't make a bit of difference.World build is... something? The world doesn't actually make a lot of sense, it basically exists enough to make the main character look cool. The mist monsters occasionally talk about being chosen to replace man, but that element hasn't gone anywhere and has no payout.In the end, there was the beginning of an interesting idea here, but nothing was done with it, and it's left the story now really feeling like anything in particular.
It's really interesting, it's a good work, author's continued your work............................................... ...............................................
Such a loving beautiful story....❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Love, fright, nervousness , separation all emotions are well portrayed. I fell in love with ML and FL.??????????????????????????????
Ik hoop dat je er iets geweldig van gaat maken =Dlaten we België machtig maken makker.
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Great stoery, lots of action in all areas but the story was rushed at the latter chapters and at the end. It was if the author just wanted to get it over and done with?.........Still!!....... Great story will reconmend to others
I don't know about other people but I can't really sit through and read although the stuff might be explained later. I just can't bear the fact that "Desire" knows things that are not supposed to be known by infants. Maybe this is supposed to be some reincarnation type but I'm dropping here. Bye