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Have Added To The Library . The novel seems to be fun but I haven't read much , just started , will read after completing some other few but this five start is for the author . This is to show the Respect for the Author Persistence .
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Overall very interesting be it plot or story but do beware that this kind of MC is not for everyone, if you like righteous MC who would at least try to save someone in trouble, if he could just by snapping his finger then you came to the wrong place WRONG PLACE I say, if that's not what you want then go read this book already you don't need to know more than this!!!Ps:I deleted original review bc it's 2am and I wrote like 20 mistakes
Some romance later on by any chance author???................................................................................................
A slow start but I trust the author. I have read the prequel and found it exhilarating. I expect the same from this novel.There is a new protagonist. He seems rather lacking in comparison to Azaroth, but I am willing to wait. I wonder what the Author has in store.
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Read 15 chapters or soStory somewhat lacking with mc who is some what boring and who often doesn't try to use his brain but rather bulldoze through yet survives, dang that plot armour.Everything, the weapon and the levelling, its all just too easy for the mc which just makes it predictable.
I really love this story cause it's full of things that boost your imagination and let you go to places that you never know can exist with the idea of friendship and loyalty.
A story that I Promise you won't regret reading if you read 80 chapters (Free) and most probably you will fall in love with it.Important: STORY: The story is about a person who dies in the game and gets a system that brought him back in time.The system isn't simple though and it gives Ryder missions that force him to do the stuff that he don't want to save his life, but there is a reason for all that. You would get to know about that if you atleast read the free chapters of the story.It's not a story about a slave to the system but about something that goes way back than this life and world. The system does all this for Ryder in a sense.The MC will be an OP MC which would be way amazing when you get to understand the inkling of the true mystery (Chapter 79 or somewhere around that).CHARACTERS: The Important Characters are all given a personality of their own which most will love.There are gods, Hobbits, Elves, cultivators, and everything one could ask for which starts to make sense from chapter 70 onwards where the seriousness of the story really gets a grip.Non Important Characters are intentionally made to overreact in certain situations which is supposed to be stupid and added in the story to give it a lighter touch. You would enjoy it if you don't think to much about that, as that's made to be like that, but that don't affect the seriousness of the story in any way.Writing Quality: There might be a few grammer mistakes but nothing major that will affect reading experience.Stability of updates: The story updates daily with mass release occasionally. It won't be dropped either like all of my stories.World Background: The world is much more extensive than the simple Real world and the game world which I hope most will like. Read more to know more.For more info: Read chapter 0
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