Idea of the story is great. The MC got reincarnated in a whole new world.Character and background of the story is well described.The only problem is writing. There a little bit grammatical mistakes but they can be ignored easily as the story has a smooth pace.All and all though the work has great potential.Well done Author!Waiting for more chapters.
Tho I see some space for improving, This story never fails to give you the feeling of comfort, and the bitter truth of life. Each chapter ends with a hope, and that makes it all more better.
I'm gonna cry because there aren't enough chapters. I need more, please sir.?The cultivation premise is so interesting and the fluff is killing me.
Oh, this is pretty cool! I didn't know what to expect going in, but your writing style resembles a merging of more traditional Western fantasy interactions and newer Light Novel-type storytelling. Very interested to see where this will go.
A lot of these reviews are weird. The braindead behaviour of so many MCs of so many novels is apparently what novel readers want. This is a very fun novel and one of the better sign in novels, for sure. the MC is good, not a moron, not a simp, the story is developing well. It's funny at times. Overall, very good.
A flawed but fairly decent novel. This has a bit of potential. As of CH 19:-Decent Cheat-Generic Protagonist-Decent translation quality-An actual story-Unremarkable worldbuilding-Somewhat confusing power system, not enough has been explained, I've got no idea what the protagonists current realm signifies.Despite my seemingly harsh evaluation above, I still think this is a very strong novel (for a trial read at webnovel). 3.75/5
First, I have to say the writing quality of this book is magnificent. The story development has been excellent and the world background is amazing. This isn't the normal cliche system books. It is unique and this is definitely a good read.
translation was so terrible that i couldnt get past first chapter. i would rather read MTL.
It is a nice story that touches in the family sphere as the angular stone. Some of the interactions are really enjoyable to read.Things to improve:Grammar: Some redundancy and hard sentences make it block the flow of the reader.Characters: While I liked the interaction between characters. It misses some inner thoughts on the making for the characters. Using subtext would create more connection with the public.All in all, keep the good work
A really great read! Really enjoyed it more than I thought I would. Integreging story and could not stop reading. Had to read it all in one go. Would recommend!!!!
Please continue i really love sandbox games and there are no really good or long novels about building and survival. so continue as i will be here to cheer you on!
Just as the author himself already stated, his English isn't very good... Especially his awful grammar makes it hard to enjoy this novel. Having an capable editor would instantly improve my rating of this novel.I am at chapter 69 and so far this novels seems to be a nice copy-mix of the standard transmigration/system/evolving monster/magical academy novels. You won't find much novelty here, but at least it's a solid mix of well known and liked themes. There have been some stupid cliché encounters and scenarios, but I still hope, that it won't go out of hand.If you are bored and don't mind ignoring bad grammar, this novel is recommendable.