it looks like a copy of a novel "against the gods
Raw looks interesting. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
please please just one competitor of we novel that's all I need someone that has good app and good novels and can compete with webnovel if there is app like that I'll switch this app is becoming price of trash don't worry I'm certain someone will see opportunity and will make app to compete with this useless crapwhat kind of useless novels are these so cliche so bad is your mental health good who is CEO of webnovel can you do your job properlythis novel is poorly written and This week and last week the novels were very bad in fact I don't wanna read them that's how bad they are like they aren't even good enough that I begrudgingly read them just to waste time I'm sorry for bad review but this novel isn't good enough sorry but I think there is something wrong with webnovel upper management how can they not care about what novels are being releasedI really wanna swear trust me if you people shut webnovel down now I won't feel a thing
It's just so freaking awesome like at first honesty we were a bit bored but later on with the story progress it became just so damn awesome I mean come on seriously Kyle is living a perfect life of a boy just love the sibling bonding specially dear author it's just awesome✔ New concept in reincarnation✔ Protagonist is awesome✔ Awesome world background ✔ Sincere Brotherhood✔ True sibling bonding ✔ Action Just awesome
This story was rather rickety to begin with. It is random and filled with ham-handed Information Dumps. The Protagonist is an Idiot. I tried hard to hang in there despite the roughness of the story, because at the end of the day, I just like Zombie Stories. It was kinda weird when the protagonist got orgasmic feelings from probing Zombie brains with his finger…EE…The breaking point was when the Protagonist DIDN'T WANT to look muscular and buff. I get more tired of this Fetish against manly physiques in these stories EVERY TIME I ENCOUNTER IT. Damned Nation! You can't argue that someone like Bolo Yeung is slow and awkward—or grotesque. I guess having a manly physique ruins one's cross-dressing.
Super rod in Quality I'll have to character development and their relationships between all of the characters I think there needs to be more information about where they come from hope I hope to see more updates and thanks for the writing
This novel is about the female protagonist finding her birth family. Her adopted mother passed away and married to ML who lost his memory. It is different from other novels in there is no reincarnation. Read it, funny for me and adorable as well
Where is discord???? Leave the link so we could join community.
So let me start by saying I have generally enjoyed this novel. It has a different focus and theme than a lot on the platform, and that not only is unique but also refreshing.On other hand I also have a few issues with it as well. (Tldr. Not bad for a quick filler read, but needs improvement)1. A very forgetful (or stupid MC)This guy would forget where his glasses were right after he put them on. I feel like the shock the author is trying to portray at certain plot events was simply done incorrectly, resulting in a character that can't understand why anything is happening when he was already explained thoroughly before.2. Pacing feels offI can 200% get behind a novel that doesn't drag its feet, but this feels almost to rushed. Or maybe it is too undetailed? There is just a lot of athletic results before and after training, then face smacking. While information is given about athletics (something the average reader may not know about), I feel like I'm missing the sweat and tears these athletes are putting in, or the work the MC is doing with them. I dont really feel like much is ever happening as time flies by.3. A very undetailed systemSystems are fun and all, and I love myself a good sentient one. But I feel as if there is no proper explanation how or why anything the system is doing happens. Tieing into the previous point, since there is no description of how anything happens, it feels as if everything is normal but results are magically different for no other reason than "because system" The systems usage here feels like the usage of "Magic" in poorly written fantasy novels. It just does whatever helps the plot/MC without proper reasoning or rules.4. Overly repetative chapters.This is a theme I've noticed in many novels and is honestly my biggest problem with this one. Through half a chapter a series of events will happen, and after someone gets their face slapped they reflect on EVERYTHING that happened. I'm not talking a sad "i regret misjudging them so rashly" comment. I mean a straight up multiparagraph synopsis of everything that went down. It's important to show proper repercussions for actions, especially for antagonists, but damn does it seem like the author is trying to add filler, constantly. It may be due to translations issues but honestly it just feels silly at times.That's about it. All said and done I still enjoy this novel for what it is and plan to keep reading. Will update this review as neccessary. Have a great day/night, and thank you author and translators for your hard work! <3
If you so much love apocalyptic stories then this webnovel is for you! Once you start reading this, you won't have time to think about other things because the story will pull you into its universe and you'd just keep on clicking the next pages until you realize you now have to wait for the next update! The scenes would keep you out of breath from the intense excitement, thrill and horror! It's really worth the read! Oh and this book is free to read so let's keep on supporting our dear author! ?
I had high hopes for this novel. The writing quality is good, the story is okay and the system is designed well.The disgusting nationalism ruins it all.Dropped.
Here is my review after more than 170 chapters:My subjective opinion: I will cut this one short. The novel is excellent, and I will read it till the end. The author takes the effort with every update, and you can see that he cares about the readers. There is only one negative thing about the novel: the writing quality.Writing Quality: Annoying to read. Why? The author doesn't care about the numbers and sometimes uses the Indian metric system, which is a grave mistake. The math is so wrong sometimes. Oh boy. The chapters are also claimed to be edited, but I still see a lot of grammatical errors such as typos like theives instead of thieves and such.Update Stability: Excellent. 2, sometimes three chapters a day. The author delivers on the bonus chapter promises and is consistent.Story Development: It is not unique; however, the author cares about the story. The characters have personalities and backgrounds. The story is easy to follow, and you won't find many plot holes. The story concentrates mainly on the game, but the real-life part is just as enjoyable. In short: The story will keep you interested.Characters Design: Maybe the best part of this novel. Well thought out deep characters with easy-to-remember background stories. World Background: Getting more complex as the chapters go. The gaming world of omega is very deep and still mostly unexplored. There is a lot of foreshadowing about the other races, strong NPC's, and the past.The real-life is mainly focused around the characters and not built up. Countries such as country P country J country X and six trillionaires rule this world. We get to know more about MC and his family. You can also smell romance in the air. Afterword: The story starts just like every other VRMMO story, but the author got hooked and built his own world. I thoroughly enjoy every chapter, and this is the first-ever novel where I dumped all my coins.