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The Synopsis is interesting...I liked how the story started...The author's choice of words is splendid...I'm eager to know how the story ends. I Hope Dean & Rhianne have a happily ever after...Great Job, & Well written, Author!
Well I like the cultivation on modern years but this have greatly spoil all of the story with it namings all the characters have Chinese names and Scott well he name in english when it also mentioned in chinese. Arg you really just translate the chinese novel to an American one.
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Writing quality is average and not bad. Story development is bad, I've only read a couple of chapters and already can't continue. This is because the system is too OP, it gives free money and basically makes the mc omnipotent. Kinda ruins the point if the novel. I'm fine with OP MCs but I would like some substances behind the face slapping. Like he actually have to do something to gain his power instead of just getting it from the system. Others might enjoy this kinda novel so to each there owncharacter design is meh, mc is just like every other Chinese OP mc in my opinion. Not a lot thereworld background is bare but that's whatever. read at your own risk.
so far the trail read was fun.the only thing i found the mc coward. but it was a bit funny to read.the choices that system give made the MC into troublemaker and death seeking idiot. ?
Love the story so far. Been enjoying it. Stable updates and if a day is missed a double is released the next day.I love the concept of the world and how you have used science to explain certain things. It makes it a lot more realistic. The MC seems to have a plan and follows, there is always a logical reason for his each and every action. Smart Mc and smart Author. There are often some grammar issues but it is not off putting. I believe in the potential of this story and I'm just here to voice(write) my appreciation. Please continue to write don't ever lose hope. Ps: I added this book to my library if that wasn't already implied.
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Just to fill 140 characters , keep it up ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????☺☺?????☺???
enthralled the emotional events and responses shown by the characters introduced in the novel really exciting
The most interesting new novel in this website, I'll wait for a chapter and decide if its up to my standards but then again it interested me.
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