At first the story seems different and interesting but as I continue reading I am getting annoyed with the MC, he got such an easy system yet he is not using it at its full potential and he is wasting points on useless skills.
I'm the author so I would shamelessly give it a five star review. And the start may be a little messy which is common in my works but please do give it a chance and read further.
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A book that emphasizes on the importance of religion/God. So cool. As a Christian myself, it's definitely something that interests me. Also I love the Bible quote at the end of the synopsis.
i apologize for my 1st review sayin this is a funny but trash.if you only read till ch 60. yes it is funny to read but with weird direction.like the saying "curiosity killed the cat"im curious about where the story gonna go from ch60 so on.so i search for mtl site.and after i read until ch500i find this book become a gem.probably the author at beginning still cannot find direction, but from ch300 the story begin to pick up. so many sentiment in the story, so much feeling, and of course so many plagiarism lol.but the author can bring me to feel more emotion, a few chapters above ch500 makes me shed a little tears.but so great.since English not my main language, i don't really mind reading from mtl site.but others probably wont be comfortable reading there.and i hope this can continue.this is a gem, such a waste if this book burried because of the first 60chapters.
The fragment holder is an interesting idea.Hope their would system update in order to expand to other games.Get more skills to support him real life.Also it would interesting adding supernatural to world but that's just my opinion.
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