Vine por tus otras obras y los tags, y me he quedado por la historia. Un comienzo "simple" que engaña, con mucha oscuridad y crueldad que llevan al MC al camino de un isekai? Pues no, resulta que es el camino más "normal" del bien y el mal. De momento enganchadisimo a la historia, aunque nunca soy muy fan de los MC consumidos por el odio/crueldad para lograr sus objetivos (y más si ello conlleva a alejarse de muchas ricas waifus). Esperando con ansias actualizaciones más constantes para no estar siempre a la espera.
A very well thought out novel with an interesting and unique world.Just by reading the first couple of chapters I can feel the depth of the story and research done by the author.Good Job and best of luck
This novel is really intresting at the first chapter, the first scene take place in some sort of a bar it did gave me some wild west vibes except no shootouts, when it comes to the fight a scene the writing is very discriptive to say the least.overall this got me hook.
Okay first of all i hope this won't go premium soon, the mc can create a world and play god so this is a plus for me because i have hard time finding creating a world concept, i can't wait to see the mc make world like cultivation or magic, keep up the good work!
overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)
I've read up to around chap 600 and I definitetly will continue waiting for the updates. I really like this novel, and I praises say it all. However, I wanna leave something that may be of help for the author, and here are a few recommendations:1. The writing could really make use of some editing, such as on some of the common word spellings i.e. "could" instead of "cloud." Also, some words were misplaced i.e. "like sword" instead of "sword like." Another thing would be the lack of "a" and "the" such as in "I am father" instead of "I am a father."2. Pseudo names and/or monikers need mitigation. I feel like frequently using "Young one" or "Snow Beauty" always makes the reader think "Who was that again?" Feel free to use pronouns for I think it will greatly improve the writing quality (and also reduce the time needed to type haha.) If author-san still wants to use the aliases, I would prefer them being used as frequently as the real names in the narration, as that will give us time to imprint the name on our heads.3. Being direct in writing flares up our imaginations more than just leaving it for us to imagine (quite ironic no?) There are times when author-san used "Obviously you know the reason why!" and I felt nice when I really knew it, but felt frustrated when I didn 't know resulting to me not grasping the events. It may be spoonfeeding, but I think being repetitive sometimes would be a great help.4. In line with #3, the descriptions could really use more specific-ness (And I really like that author-san got better in describing characters in the latest chapters.) The places where the scene happens need a bit more detail such as the color of the room, the placement of the furnitures/obstacles, the POV location, the sights as the eyes extend toward either left or right, etc. You can also utilize mentioning widths and lengths (numbers don't hurt; more so in moderation.) Also you can elaborate on the number of enemies too, and the exact number that died/are left. In terms of describing powers, it can also be a bit useful to use "the shockwave reached 3 kilometers" and the world sizes may also utilize this by comparing to the size of the Earth.5. The world building is a bit confusing for me. It might help by releasing a helpful chapter for the essential information. I still don't understand a few of the power aquisition and improvements up till now (maybe my comprehension is bad too I guess hehe)6. There are a few plotholes, but all stories have them right? Just don't forget what happens to the people/buildings/world around the event portrayed. Don't hesitate to mention how the roof collapsed, how buildings in a 100 km radius got blown, how a lot of people ran when this guy appears etc etc. They really get us to feel the events.7. In line with #6, the R-18 scenes are a little inconsiderate HAHA. There are just times when the MC is walking here then boom the R-18 scenes come and I don't know how the hell they came from the shop to the dark alley.In summary: Don't hide anything from us author-san. Pour everything you imagine into writing. We want to see what you see. We want to know what you know. I f*cking love this novel and I will don anything to help it get even more f*cking good. Love from a loyal reader of yours~P.s. If I have more suggestions, I will reply them here as well :D Keep writing!
5 stars because it is a harem.
Humorous, but extremely repetitive and dragged out. Terrible plot development. Extremely slow as well.The chapters are also extremely expensive compared to normal. If you really want to read the novel, either use your fast passes or do it elsewhere.Regardless, not a novel I will continue reading, nor do I recommend you to either.
Here we go again.Look at the review and you will see tons of idiot calling MC is plagiarizing.This is just fiction, get a life if you have time criticizing a fictionally character. If you don’t agree to me then don’t reply to me, I don’t want to get contaminated by your stupidly.
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I quite liked the story but it gets a bit hectic along chapters +27. After the ancestral transformation everything just went a bit chaotic. I do wish that the author could go more in depth into the mc's backstory as that seems quite interesting. Or he can make it into a flashback. Overall though the story is quite good and I have to say I only wrote this review for more chaps. Also if author sees this review do you have a outline to follow because seeing where the story should end up helps greatly with planning it out for future chapters.
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