CurtneyOl
I. Love. It.Still haven't figured out if all of this is in his head or not, but that's the best part.A hidden masterpiece boys, I reccomend it with my entire being.
Hi All,I wanted to reach out to express my sincerest apologies on not being able to finish my previous novel.This will be an edited version of my previous work with a similar name. There were some parts that I were not happy with on the previous novel and i will work to fix these issues, and to continue with the story until the end. Definitely not for those under 18 as the story progresses. The relationships are not going to be one dimensional where the relationships are just physical, so I'll try build them rather than protagonist banging thousands of people mindlessly. His harem will have interesting characters that are not often in others!Enjoy
Ni se molesten en leer, cada capítulo consiste en no más de 5 párrafos cortos o medianosDe 3 a 5 capítulos hacen un capítulo promedio de tamaño mediano comparado con tras obras, el autor quiere pasarse de listo
It true later on it is a little different,but point is you just took different idea from different novels and made it a little better. I prefer some more original ideas. No matter how you wrap something more beautifully,it is still the same item. Plus this character design is nothing new. Plenty of them out there that are similar like him. For me it is just too edgy and cliche.
1 love this one it was me dieing laughing, already recommended to a few friends, hope the creator has other books...........................
Interesting Idea I look forward to more content so I can give a more in depth review. Thanks to the author for sharing your story!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty good novel so far. Generic bullied main character, but he doesn't seem to let it bother him, and there hasn't been any face slapping so far. The plot seems unique so far, the main character is your typical over power protegenist who steam rolls through challenges. Which is not a bad thing, but might be a turn off for some. Some of the story seems a bit rushed, would like to see the author slow down a bit and enjoy the moment.
shining duos was better that's all I got to say. .
Why are they not updating the story anymore. Would love it to continue.
Actually insane how straight up a copy it is. We really shouldn't incentivise this kind of blatant plagiarism, don't read! ==========≠======
Seriously disappointing. Contrived and forced "hardship" plot points. The one that made me stop reading was when the author decides to write that the fate fragment decided to do something that will forever prevent the MC from being able to use his fate powers and doesn't tell him until she gets called out by someone else,, which makes the fate fragment useless, conniving trash. It was a completely idiotic plot point, and ruined the entire plot and made me immediately despise the character which pretty much ruins the entire story since she's the second most important character after the MC.
I wrote this review so that this website would start translating the remaining chapters as soon as possible.I wrote this review so that this website would start translating the remaining chapters as soon as possible.I wrote this review so that this website would start translating the remaining chapters as soon as possible.
