The original was peak. I have no doubt this will also be amazing. Never thought it would return ngl.
Hey everyone, Author here! I hope you're enjoying Ren's adventure so far. Feel free to share your feedback - it'll help me improve and make the story even better!
there needs to be some work especially in terms of character consistency but since it's only a couple chapters so far I'll you 5 stars.
I like it. I did question Mc thought process he did do a job on his cover story I would never thought of it.
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Well well well the story is well written and I'm already in love with the plot. The description of the characters is straight forward and simple, The first person point of view makes it more interesting, I loved your story and I am definitely gonna read this one till the end ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This is a story about an Evolved Ghost in a Fantasy world!Enjoy!Feel free to ask questions...
Its good the dialogs the characters and the scenes are executed nicely, the power system is kinda new like the word essentia its like they are mutants or they all have one special abilities the naming sense is also good , it's a really good read. Keep it up Author. Im rooting for you.
Beautiful story …couldn’t get enough of it…
I’ve really been enjoying this novel so far! Keep up the good work Mr Author. Filler filler filler filller why do I need 140 characters??????
Ryan stopped pounding as his fists started to bleed. When the speaker had spoken he knew that there was no hope left. He had tried to hold his breath but ultimately ended up inhaling the gas. There were no reactions as he had suspected but he felt full of power.