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Hello, guys, I'm the author, and I'm doing a shameful auto review. If you want to know something about my book, ask something, or just say your opinion about it, fell free to tell me about it.
Dropped at ch6. Main reason - abysmal writing quality (2/5). Bland and ****** language I can stomack, its a light novel, not classical literature, but the way the Author uses punctuations is just... I have no words. I guess, he thinks you put comma wherever you pause in your speech, even if you pause to take breath. Or, more plausible explanation, his keyboard is malfunctioning and the comma key is jammed, firing on its own every now and then."he asked, Joe what was happening" <-- not even the worst, I've seen in one place he put comma after "the
Interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting interesting
like another review I saw on this book this description did to give me a ****ing Stroke............................................. hopefully it's good
It's a fan fiction right so why is it in this section and finally as its a ff why the heck chapters are locked. Finally is it a ff or not
Need more please this is so... It is like seing what i want before searching like a dog in a trash can. Please i beg you write more for me and the other fans
One of the Most Unique Virtual Reality Novels out there right now it has it own twist and turns Cant wait for the new Chapters Keep up the good work Author keep grinding
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I am a lover of all things supernatural. This is why. There are so many possibilities in materials like this. I do believe a few was marks were missed to broaden the world and story a bit but overall it is an incredible read.
Ok so I like the story and I love the comedy, one thing that does need a bit of toning down is the relation to reality it kinda breaks the emersion I mean it's been 1k years since our age tland they remember too much from that era.