CubanPete1999
Great book. I can't wait to read Rosalie,Amelia, and the twins ...
Looove this! I really like how you describe the performance and even put the lyrics in there too. And the song choices are great! Really enjoying this story!
77 Chapters 5/10/23. Always glad to see updates!
interesting story..
190 chapters 7-22-24
so basically another story of a woman who goes back to a man who didn't honor the wedding vows and cheated on her throughout the marriage.... yeah don't bother reading it. it's a drag and not that well written either. the characters lack principlea and values. and ML is obsessed with cheating
I really love this book. good work author!!!
As usual Saree doesn't disappoint, with the exception that I am BEGGING for new chapters. Solid storyline and heroes that leave you hating to love them in a circumstance or two.
this is sounding a bit like the movie predator
A delightful short story that perfectly matches its title and synopsis. It's cheerful and lighthearted, with the people who fired her eventually regretting their decision. The adventuring elements add just a touch of tension. If you're in the mood for something light and quick, give it a read.
MC was initially shy, but that didn't last. Everything went smoothly, though the later parts of the story were a bit rushed.
, it's a very nice slice-of-life story.
The reviewer seems to be expressing strong dissatisfaction with a novel from a platform called Novelpia. They criticize the main character (MC) for being unreliable, unlikable, and lacking a distinct personality, even comparing him unfavorably to other fictional characters with more depth, such as Japanese (JP) dense characters and Chinese (CN) overconfident alpha males. The reviewer also laments the lack of character development and a compelling story, stating that the plot revolves too much around the MC's writing.
Despite their negative critique, they do acknowledge the illustrations and sexual content as the highlights, describing them as the best part of the book. The reviewer jokes about the author's ability to attract male readers, mentioning specific chapters for sexual scenes (Marie Ch 111-113, Cecily 166-169, Adelia 270-271). However, overall, they express disappointment and consider giving the book only one star.
In summary, the reviewer is disappointed with the character development and storytelling but appreciates the visual and sexual aspects of the novel.
