The story is quite good, though the grammar is a mess.
Its an interesting story with all twists and turns a story should have.I would definitely recommend to all my friends to read this story.Awesome work of the author.
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If you're picking this book. Do know that there is a lot of show-not-tell moment. Keep in mind, if the protagonist is talking to something, someone, or himself, he will, and always put on a smile.This detail is rarely mentioned by him narrating it, but the cues throughout the story hinted it, and the people around him will sometimes mention it in their dialog.That took me a moment to notice on first few chapters. Hope this will elevate the experience of whoever as clueless as I do at first read. If not, it is a fun detail to mention imo.Basically, the mc is one smug little basta-
Thanks to everyone who came to read this story. The novel has more than 200 episodes today. It is popular in Thailand. Please be assured that this novel will have enough episodes.
It seems that this author has taken a page from the theory that you need to kill off your characters to make adjustments to the story. If you like game of thrones which I absolutely HATE then you probably will be fine as the writing seems to be good. What we have here is a revenge-fest and the author thought it was a good idea to trigger that with the death of a main love interest as well as a family member. I personally despise all stories where the author builds up a major attachment for a particular character with the audience and then goes and kills that character for very little reason. There are many ways to change the direction of a story and this is a highly dramatic one but it also alienates a significant portion of the audience. Of course going by how popular game of thrones is I can see why so many authors are taking that approach. Overall I do not recommend this story to anyone, the reason being from my prospective if you are someone who likes reading about betrayal/tragedy revenge-fests then there is something wrong with you emotionally. I am just glad that I skimmed ahead at chapter 36 when I started thinking that this was going to be one of those stories.
Author why do you go and use your right hand until chapter 111 and then u can see your slow development of your novel? Or u can ask for your mother's help? U have guts to say that your novel will be better after chapter 100 with only 97 characters online?
Some idiots are reviewing without reading to boost the review rating. The rest of the novel after chapter 1 isn't even the same story. Either that or this author is just so bad at writing that they messed up.
Doing this just to balance that 1 star spamming idiot who rates without checking the source of the novel....................................
at first glance it look like a good novel with lots of potential.But this novel is very shallow and the characters have no life in them.everything comes too easy. first system gift: 10000000000 sys points.first guy he recruits gets everything for free, he asks no question on how there is a gravity chamber on earth or the time dilation training chamber or the teleport bracelet with storage space, its treated like the most ordinary stuff in the world, no surprise no emotion.i would go crazy about any one of those things.Romance? how to describe it: see--> like-->wifey during the beginning of the date.the concept is good though, and it can be expanded.what i wanted to see when i read mercanary group on earth and then world travel was not the mc finishing on earth and then moving on, but more the likes of an interdimensional mercanary group with the headquarter on earth portals to different worlds.that'd be cool(i have only read to chapter 8 so i don't know if its going in this direction)
me encanta es satisfactoria la historia como en el arco de la mama que sufria trata de personas al final volvio con sus hijas y mc me encantó la comedia y la personalidad de MC adoro al que subió esta bovela porque yo la queria leer en español y no me dejava en su pagina pero esta esta mas avanzada y puedo traducirla a español (soy mala en ingles la tradusco con chome)
Translator stopped translating which is all well and good, but decided togo premium after changing translator? this novel gets updated maybe once a month and does not deserve premium, i know qidian just want money but this is getting out of hand, gonna go read this on a free site regardless of whether its straight copy paste from here, im not wasting money on this stupid site anymore.