Oh wait.
Roland would be lying if he said he wasn't excited. Seeing the gate being activated as well as seeing the old witch's hand 'go through the wall', he was more filled with anticipation for what was to come.
nice good story. keep writing. nice good work
"You never told me what spring's like over there," she said between some pickled cucumber and a mouthful of rice. "I want to know, but I'm not doing you company," she added after she had swallowed the rice. "This place is all I need, well apart from you being here."
Three chapters in and I detect whimsiness in the female lead, which I love. Great job so far author.
This is a great story for those who enjoy a well-paced novel. The author excels in terms of writing quality, character development, world-building, and overall storytelling. It's remarkable how well-written this novel is, especially considering that English is not the author's first language!Please keep writing author and keep up the good work!
Quite a good story so for keep it up Author I personally liked how fast you transitioned his poverty to somewhat rich as some authors that have money systems in their novel take to long to get out of the poverty stage with the MC always stressed out trying to make money in shameless ways.I also like how ironically he made way more money from the cashback system simply from caring about a friend he feels gratitude towards instead of the girl he got with specifically to make money which is quite funny and I don't know if you did it on purpose or not to foreshadow a realization the MC will have in the future but I liked it so kudos to you author :)
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Was already engrossed by the drama that the prolouge had given but then suddenly the MC was forced to use a female avatar...................................................... Error...... Not my type of story...
This story is amazing. After reading multiple chapters I can say that the way the author strings together words is top tier. Reading these sentences will make you visualize them with great detail and I believe that is what makes a horror story great. Keep up the great story!
you have an amazing attention to detail. i love the world you have built. Maybe try pulling at the reader heart, certain phrases or moments in his life.