Alright first review from a lvl 15!overall the book is very enjoyable. The author knows how to hook the reader into wanting more. He knows how to describe a lot of things in details. The plot and world building is actually good. The cliffhangers will end up making us wanna fight the author.Here will be some spoilers and criticism.Do not read this if you don’t wanna be spoiled.Sometimes you mix up the povs of who is fighting. In one of the fight where belain was fighting you switch to Mika name instead of belain.(I probably spelt his name wrong) The pacing of the story could use some work. The mc has a little over a year left to live but still struggles against students. He won against Ophelia but lost to Xander and struggled against the disciplinary committe. Granted he was exhausted and other factors came into play. I still think he should’ve put a way better fight considering he won against Ophelia and the demons and survived against Olivia.The romance with the teacher caught me off guard. When we things progressive future more into their relationship? Will it be a harem with the other members?
I love this Novel!!!.Best Chaotic Mc Ever.
Honestly I wish there was more I would pay good money for definitely recommend
Quite the good novel I fear. For I ran out of chapters to read ??
Mantap, saya suka......apalagi ceritanya berasal dari tanah kelahiranku makassar, lanjutkan terus nah bro / sis, saya tunggu selalu chapter terbarunya, ewako
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I do like your novel, really do, its enjoyable from my end. Its just the references are overboard.. There are 2 death note references, 'I can't laugh yet. ' This is repeated twice. Then Of course there's classroom of the Elite, Grace seem to be a mix of kei and kushida, that hidden boss who Quinn fears kinda seem like Ryuuk but smarter and dangerous and plus he believe he believe someone is pulling the strings behind Class A and plus the hidden boss is from class C so yeah... And there was some code geass too but that's manageable. Plot seem kinda forced, I mean it seemed he just went from normal to super genius. And Lucas saying - 'Fear me' 'there's no way you can escape, submit to me'..and sometimes that emotional eyes. His character never gonna lie is cringey. I think for him you should focus on 'showing not telling'. Altogether, you can make people more realistic, plot development smoother and stop with the overly noticeable references and there you have it. A Great novel.
Tbh i havent read The whole book im doing this because i Will be one of The First reviewers plus for xp but im not boring like those other xp reviewers i Will tell you a joke, ok so knock knock, youre supposed to answer who's there, well say it then, no i mean you have to tell me who's there, well you're not saying who's there guess you'll never know The punchline
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An awesome novel ?................................................................................................................................................................................
This is actually a pretty good novel besides that ntr shit
Nice i love it and very interesting to read. If youre asking if this story was worth it to read yes it is?AHAHAHAHA.?