Spoiler Alert:Chap 137-138Gets an item from the game to turn invisible. Save a neighbor girl from 2 armed assassins.That same day, author wrote love this and love that then they sealed the deal in bed.Wow.Anyways, a major turn down for me. Decided to quit reading it. Not much development, just a guy fast lvling usng cheat monsters.The author mish mashed the contents trying to make it emotional, mysterious and funny but failed. It's too fast paced for its own good it cant maintain a good storyline.No parents.Sick sister.In debt.A broken gaming helmet.An op ingame cheat.Easy money. Millions to Billions. Beats the military and other secret organizations in the missions of the game.Writer under estimates the military too much.They can check your bank accts. especially that you made millions of money and that you are not yet a bonafide citizen of a high end energy city. You're from the slums.It was good at first, can tolerate it. But the addition of secret police/military/organization in a somewhat light hearted storyline, gehhhh.the additional of very fast romance is gehhhhh.the addition of making virtual iyems real is gehhh..this is considering the fact that the vmmorpg is not yet fully developed to the point that it's passable as a game that adheres to 100% reality.gehhjj...I'd say a letdown after the first 100 chapters. it has potential but mehh.
Hi, the author here. It's my first novel guys. I am pretty inexperienced about but I will try to become better at this. I hope you will enjoy this novel.
overall pretty good, can't even think of any constructive criticism..................................................................................
Is it shameful to give your own book 5 stars? What a joke! If I can't like my own book, who else will?
Besides that... I'm seeing all the "Don't drop the book" comments, can you guys also see the pressure that writing a story like this has? ;3
I'd just like to say that I don't plan on doing so at all. I quite like how things are going and I'd like to make this one of the best light novels out there.
But thanks for the support guys, I really appreciate it and the fact that I'm getting so much love despite this being my first book is really welcoming. So I thank you.
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this novel is truly great.but need more chapters author update fast bro
Testing... 1(brain)... 2(eyes)... 3(comprehensive ability to use both while reading this)... ✔️Before I begin... Cough! Cough! NO HAREM!!!! ?Okay, now that I've gotten that out, I can proceed with a little evaluation.This is my first attempt at writing a Villain book and a different take at trying to implement a variation of a sibling to it.I appreciate all who go out of their comfort zone to comment, vote, gift, purchase privilege chapters, use fast passes regularly, give 'constructive' criticism in the comments or reviews, and joined my discord server.Feel free to ask anything that isn't in the auxiliary chapter [if I don't reply but give a like means it's definitely in the auxiliary chapter]Have a great day!~Author Bloom ?
For now the story is really good i just hope the author is gonna keep the good work and keep updating us i dont want him to drop this story !
This book is a Master peice and its sad seeing such a gem not have a higher ranking Each chapter makes you want to read the next and becomes an addiction.Amazing author.The Only things that could be better is more chapters but i would rather have less chapters and higher quality.
From 2 chaps I could tell this is good, wish it updated more though. Nice work! You did a great job making this. Now I'm spreading out this review so I can post it.
Would really love an update author....... Thank you for your writing. I know its no easy. Readers come and enjoy the dragon queen. And motivate our author. More votes, comments, reviews and add to ur library. Don't just read and go.
I love this kind of novel, I wait for it to turn into a 100 kilometer snake so that it can swallow a planet, I am so excited , I hope it will be chosen √√√√√√√ √