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A nice novel with great potentialThen the author pulled a reversal (at about chapters 70 or so) turning it into a trash novel, copy pasting from another novel shamelessly, changing just the character names and removing a lot of content in between making the story senseless. The author didn't even bother to adjust the story to fit the system in his/her novel. He/she basically discarded the entire system concept(success rate system) which was developed in the previous chapters n didn't even bother to apply success rate concept when possible in the new chapters.The story after 70 or so is blatantly following ultimate scheming system not even bothering to disguise it. I feel the author suddenly developed intese hatred towards uss n thus developing a very trash version of it.
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Overall, it's pretty good. Overall, it's pretty good. Overall, it's pretty good. Overall, it's pretty good. Overall, it's pretty good. Overall, it's pretty good. Overall, it's pretty good.
NOTICE: Tales of Herding Gods is no longer on a hiatus!Hello everyone! I am the new translator for TOHG! It seems like no one wants to pick up this novel so I guess I'll take over the job. Safe to say, I will be fully translating this novel down to the final word unless something extremely urgent happens (for example, I die of natural or unnatural causes!). I will be uploading 2-3 chapters daily on isotls.com so if you want to support me, please go check out the website and read it there! I'll also make a patreon page for those that wish to have 5 unreleased chapters in advance for 1 dollar (I'll link it once I've made it). I may increase the tiers and advance chapters depending on the demand. Anyhow, come check out my work at isotls.com, I will be uploading every day at 5PM EST. By the time you're reading this, I have already completed 3 chapters. Just waiting for 5PM to hit :-).Chwan signing out. 02/08/2022
One of the first mafia novels I have ever read so if I say some stupid stuff I am sorryFirst off, writing quality. Fair warning I am not very privy to small details when I am reading. So far (33 chapters) the writing quality has been great. Little to no mistakes (that I noticed) and even the small mistakes that I spotted (like two) barely affected my reading so great job there author! Five starsUpdating stability- Just started reading today so no idea about this. Story development- Over the course of the story, many interesting events continued to happen and the actions the mc and other charcters took were very interesting and kept me very engaged. Again very well executed author. Five starsCharacter design- I would go into detail about all the little things that I liked but that would spoil the story so I won’t. However I will say that the challenges and things that head towards the mc and how it develops not only him but the people around him is very pleasing to read. Five starsWorld background- Since we are only 33 chapters in and the world seems very much based on the real world (which makes sense really) no complaints here. Not only that but the way the world is slowly developed alongside the mc’s life and escapades make the story so much more interesting since you never know what new thing will show up next. Five starsAll in all, a very interesting and pleasing story to rear with its own charm perfectly executed. Also the way the author showcases the intelligence and cunning of the mc and his skills as a mafia leader is very well done amking the story that much more exciting. 10/10Last and final point, Nero cause Nero. Nero approves.
This novel has a lot of potential and I hope it will not be dropped. The book also has a unique tower + seven sins team with there still being many things to add about the world and Mysteries to be uncovered. It's truly packed with many possibilities.
This is simply a little message that I wanted to send to you guys.I've made the decision to make a few alterations ever since the protagonist changed into a girl during the "Castlemania" arc, at the end.The protagonist was originally planned to remain a girl for around three arcs, which would have required 150 chapters, subtracting about 50 from "Castlemania" (100 chapters left).Because the protagonist was originally going to be a female (one-time thing) due to the events of "Castlemania," I chose to return his gender in order to advance the plot.I'd like to let you know that after the "Castlemania" storyline is complete, the protagonist will once more be a guy.
First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusionfor the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it.in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake hereAs character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is.as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh.as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for nowoverall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novelare Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective
Amazing story, kept me reading for hours on end just to see what happened next, quite disappointed that it ended where it did but will definitely read more once it finally released.
all I have to say is that this MC is literally to worst MC I have ever read about, he literally ticks off all the boxes I hate about different MCs all in one horrible package, other then that thou the novel could have a lot of potential but its impossible to read cause of the shitty MC
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Already read the previous novel and like it so much , sad that it was delete .hope there will be many improvement in this than the previous one . Good job & keep it up ?
