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I want to see this get animated one day. it's a great fantisy story that has a unique world and characters.
Very nice grammar. Seems to be a good read as far as I can tell. Would recommend though I would wait until there are more chapters.
A very good story and amazing updating frequency (though it has started decreasing a little) but somewhat short chapters... However so long as it doesn't go on hiatus... It possesses the potential of being a hit
I remember adding this to my library back when there was only 3 chapters, hoping, and not my wish has come true, I really hope this gets picked.?
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The story is a bit cliche, but I am enjoying it as my junk food, I like the main character as he gets things done, he is op, but that's only when he's against the same level or 1 higher
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I have also read the novel you have taken inspiration from and I must say the quality of your novel matches my expectations.Really good.Awesome novel.Keep it up!Also do try to not go down the path of that novel where plot development was basically almost gone towards the end.Though fluff always keeps you hooked I guess ?
Well done, try using some grammar tool to fix the mistakes, although it's not much obvious, more like once in 2 chaps.Great story! keep going.
We have a MC who suffered the pain of being dematerialized in his death and then endured more than two billion years of disputes where his soul and mind were strengthened, and then we are presented with the character of Juno, basically a crutch for when the MC needs and that he received knowledge about the powers of the MC and of human history, things that obviously the MC himself could have received directly, or is that what we learned from all this? that we have a strong MC that the author is making it weaker for us to push our throat into a valid reason for the existence of Juno, his future romantic partner, and that is simply a drug !!! this is making history lose a lot of quality sincerely !! sad to see such a good story lose potential as a result of such nonsense !!! Besides, the story is very good and well worked in general.
Ah, classic. I’ve also had this happen to me before, the only difference being that no one told me that it was an escape show... I’m still waiting for them to tell me that, but until then, I’ve got to keep running from the cops.