Why else would there be one?
That’s just how skeletons look like.👍🏻
Oh no, I see a loli tag. SKIP!
Mah boi. Its literally ranked around 30-60 last time i checked.
Does the author reveal Josh MF Malum's way to training before the tower happened
Can somebody tell me without spoiling around what chapter does he himself realize everybody can use actual powers and magic?
I remember this was one of my first novels that I read on here. Unfortunately, I did not finish it because of "a reason I forgot". It has now been at least 2-3 years and I think I might finish now.
Any update??
You know what, seeing the world from the eyes of an emo kid is not as exciting as I thought it was. It's actually downright exhausting and frustrating.
The MC is not edge lord and thank god it is not a system novel. Book is good. Atleast Give it a try before passing judgement. My first issue is pacing. The pacing is too fast paced and stabilized somewhere around 50 chapters. Hope author continues it that way otherwise it feels like watching a YouTube video on 4x speed. Second issue is main characters are training day in and day out. There is not enough break. From readers POV it would too overwhelming as they are productive every chapter posted. To offside it, show how MC and similar are interacting like going outside doing something entertaining etc. it kinda takes readers mind off but the transition should be organic. MC is becoming too OP too fast. Even without system cheats MC is becoming OP too fast. Better make the MC settle for sometime and make readers adjusted. Naruto is a story which takes more chapters to fully explore. So it is best if author takes it slow and explores more. Author specific:- If you are serious about writing this fic, Try to look in reddit sub threads for novels with high intense fight narration. It might help writing more flushed out fight scenes. Fight scenes are the bread and butter of Naruto fic. The story premise would be same for all the thousands of fics but if you want your fic to stand out you need to bring in more to the table. Overall it is 4 out of 5. Let me know about the criticism author if you have read the review.
In 25 chapters all i get is the twisted story of a pathetic mc, this novel is just a yellow wet print in the sand. Mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm 140 characters
Just read the first few chapters, you'll understand why I gave such a low score. The translation seems good, but the actual novel is just. . . bad. It only goes into small amounts of detail, and makes the peoples reactions incredibly unbelievable. The characters actions bring you away from being immersed into the story every sentence, or two if you're lucky. I've seen better written fan-fictions on wattpad, and I'm not saying those were even close to decent.