Good character and world-building; Slivan is likeable and he knows his shit. The only problem was that he believed he could take the Titan. He couldn't. Now, after 3 years, he was offered the chance to redeem himself and maybe save his friends.
The writing style is amazing, I love how Zara goes through the new worldHonestly a great read, it's not easy to see good novels like this nowadays.
The writing is fine, the mc is beyond insufferable, shes been dealt a bad hand and for the first ten chapters does nothing but whimper to herself when at near every turn she makes her situation worse for herself. If the mc is just going to sit still and have the story happen to them its beyond frustrating tone wise.
Hope really you don’t drop this novel like you did with Worldsmith…
Talk about page turner! As someone has already said this is so beautifully written that you crave more with each chapter!The characters, even the side characters have their own lives and the author has done an excellent job at making them real. You can literally imagine how Ray will react to Xion's blunder or how Allen and Nazia will handle things. Darius, the ML is unpredictable! Like really unpredictable. You can't guess his thoughts other than that he is amused by our adorable bunny Xion!
As the author of this book, the plot is pretty incredible I must say. I have written lots of stories on other platforms, but this is among my favorites. Travelling in between two different worlds while engaging in mind blowing adventures, face slapping, and dare devil missions is definitely the best way to live. This is a ride that would keep you excited.
just seeing how far this goes,still planning on writing maybe a hundred or so chapters
it's a good novel, one of a kind. hope to see more in the future
I love it!! I had being bored for a while and I think this tory is nice although it doesn't have a lots of recommends but I can recommend people to read it.
love these type of novels the lord type I mean. dont think I've read one that uses gacha but enjoying it so far cant wait for more.
Your character is quite interesting.... Her attitude is where portrayed ..It shows her behavior from her life before this reincarnation cycle then the life and frustration of a being that keeps suffering and not making it or living up to a year... Then you highlighted the emptiness already settling in ..which relates more with what your character has gone through...A marvelous world... The God also showed and the fact that it called her daughter creates a wide branch you can go to...Is she really a God's child...Then what must she predict....what future will she see... Etc..Will she eventually find out about the fact that she is a God's child...The grammar... World building is on point.Especially the discussions.. interaction..Conversation between characters is well done...You are talented bro and your novel is wonderful...Keep up the good work...it got me hooked ...For lovers of reincarnation mixed with an interesting MC..This is the one for them..
I adore your writing ❤️. Every word, every character, and every scene you create touch the heart of readers .Your attention to detail, the depth of your characters, and the emotion you illustrate is commendable. Please keep on writing waiting for your next upload . Xoxo ?