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If you completeld read thise novel I am reading chapter 1342 it got Boring should i read or not ? is future chapters interesting
Did he only get together with the FL because she was pretty. I'm not seeking anything showing otherwise it's like she doesn't even have a personality.
It combined alot of movies and tv shows together. It pretty good, I would say. It slow however, so dont be expecting him to be fighting like the hulk in 300 chapters.
yall honestly this really good but you just gotta deal with the confusion from the first couple chapters. other than that ml n fl rly cute n loyal! i also like the fl attitude, although its like a typical wuxia (smo bad mouths the mc then the mc takes revenge sorta thing) she isnt like other fl who just stays quiet and waits for a huge misunderstanding to blow up n everyone bad mouths her but instead she actually fights n speaks up when smo talks shi!! which i luvv cus my patience is so bad i jus want her to beat up those ppl and show how badass she is :> OH n zi feng really annoying, yall better calm your hearts once shes been introduced
MC dont like a woman that loves him. He likes the one that wanted to kill him.. WTF
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Why this story not continue?? Its very interesting..FL is quick witty ML so pampering to FL..im stil waiting for the next chapter...
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Ahh soo excited finally a good updated football novel im loving every bit of it ?♥️?
I'm kind of disappointed; I mean I'm not saying that the idea is bad but it feels the story is unrealistic for the most part and the interaction between characters is just straight out weird with lots of unfamiliar terms at that point time furthermore it feels rushed and those interviews at the start was awkward-I think you should pay more attention to details and making it more realistic and engaging and that is clearly lacking.It'd be better to showcase problems of caste system and how to solve these first then go ahead with military part while also taking care of nobles which are more of a tumor.I've read another Indian novel-(India that could be by Maddymudda)So I had great expectations!Nice try to be honest much appreciated as I too hail from the south so it's quite fascinating to read this novel which has great potential, I would really like it if you could attempt a rewrite or something to attract more audience.
I love the way you write! The story is well-paced, and I like how the scenes are written and described. Especially how you described what the protagonist was feeling along with the well-written dialogue, this is a good read! Keep it up! ^^