ALECI68
When will we get an update for this book?
thanks for reading
Nice story.. But it’s incomplete. Where is the rest?
Saved to library for future read. I so loved and enjoyed across the desk and weathering the storm and I am sure this will be equally amazing book. I am itching to start this one already... but I hate cliffhangers and waiting for updates. Let’s see how long will I last?
when will you start your next book and who's going to be next.......
good story,cannot stop reading
Eka and Rina are such a naughty couple, add Eka's friend too! Haha. Your narration is great. It really pulled me into Rina and Eka's world. Great job!
Excellent!!
Update the next chapters author hihi
Haven't really noticed this before. Was it any good?
I read the first 20 chapters but didn't connect with the novel.
It's hard to explain why, but it's mainly because when reading it, I feel like the MC is simply flying over the story: when he does some actions, the direct consequences of it are vaguely explained, but the actions themselves do not seem to be connected with each other nor to a greater plot.
When reading it, you feel like the MC does some things in a specific location, goes to another place, does some other things, and the cycle repeats, without an end goal.
That and some parts of the writing I find lazy. While this is a harem novel, the female characters are empty shells to further the MC's needs at the moment, however, they feel as disconnected from things as the MC, so you tend to get bored very fast.
No, she's a Queen.
