Super duper tollllllĺllllllllll echt jetzt
The author clearly made effort with the writing, which is appreciated in a sea of mistranslations. So far, good pacing, nice creativity, and we can see a bit of a cliché story, but it's been approached nicely! Keep it up
I really like the way you roleplay the story and how it updates, but i suggest you put more world background so the audience can actually "Feel" or imagine what's happening in the story 8/10 :D
Read her first book as one of my friends is an avid fan and recommended it to me! but after reading just few chapters! I became addicted! and now we bond over what is new with the author's works, be it updates or new books! We will always support you author, I have become your loyal fan!
"Assistant!" the doctor shouted again.
"Let me see" JK said
(the location I forgot and too tired to write)
Sara-
Lemparkan anak bajingan kepadanya, anak haram yang sengaja membuatnya terlihat buruk. Tianxin berharap keras mereka berdua untuk mati di tempat, tidak, dia ingin menusuk mereka sampai mati, memotong tubuh mereka dan memberi tubuh mereka untuk makanan anjing-anjing!
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
This is so creepy
My world's on fire, how about yours?