As it is just one chapter, I am posting this review for a little motivation. Please make sure that you keep updates in timely manner even if not on daily basis. I like the synopsis, which is kind of opposite of Scheming system and similar to Hero System. Although it is alright taking inspirations from other pieces, but remember to stand out. ✌️
Isn’t this I’m a quadrillion? All they did was change the names . It’s literally a total copy
I read the first 11 chapters they’re good and full of slice of life and I like that, wholesome too which surprised me cause it’s a cultivation novel no need to explain further. So yeah for those who reading reviews before reading a novel then start reading it’s good ( at least for me ) hope author won’t drop this or go in an unlimited days hiatus.
Mc with no brain cell, system slave, and yuri
Hmmm… how should i say it…
After chapter 20 or so the writing quality would decrease drastically
[Example: He became 2 times stronger because of the Golden Power
Suddenly a Golden energy flourished inside his Merdians.]
It’s like the beginning of the Chapter is the End of the Chapter
And the End of the chapter is the Beginning
Author pulled a Uni Reverse on this
I quit after reading 4th line from end of 1st chapter. This novel is complete TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH
Shamelessly rating my own novel :P
Hey guys I just started writing Apex System and this is my first novel so I would appreciate both good and bad reviews as I want to improve as I continue this novel.
Anyways that's all for now. Peace out
-King
I like the general story idea, but there are way too many grammar mistakes, and it makes reading it a bit of a chore. plus I'm not too keen on zaya as a character already.
can be skipped. good premise, but childish attempt. should be more rational yet sounds like stuck with 10 year olds
Story is good and is sent up to really develop in the future, however I’m 35 chaps in and the mc isn’t using his reincarnated advantages. Like I get that he’s 5 yr old but he should be trying to do more. ie read, sign contracts, etc
When you coming back man/woman? We still want to see where the story leads to and ends.
I'm short of words right now. The only thing I can say is, I recommend this novel to everyone. This novel is quite intriguing.