The major problem with the book is the synopsis... As both the title and synopsis offer nothing about what the book is really about it makes it hard to be intregued by the book to even read the first chapter... That one word synopsis will work if its an author already famous for good work at it would intregue... Just hope author learns from this... First impression that is the title, synopsis & tags are really important...
I hope that author could explain well the reason behind every choices and actions that the mc made withouth spilling too much and ruining the course of the story. So far i love this book hopefully the quality increase or at least stay stable. ?
everything was great till I had to buy the whole book. now the gender of character's is being switched or messed up in almost every other sentence.
It is a 'fun' and 'unique' story. A 'never seen before' plot.MC is a trash with no cultivation prospect. He has a fallout with his fiance who is a genius cultivator and a respected disciple of a big sect. MC gets a cheat and cultivates to a relatively high realm. He kills his fiance and those that plot against him. He kills a young master and then when the young master's patriarch comes to kill him, MC kills the patriarch and puts the entire clan to death. MC kills as easily as drinking and eating.
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Woah.The story is intense. Packed with action right from the first chapter. The MC came into the story with such a grand entrance that your head will spin.MC seems to be quite bitter after what he went through. I expect the story to develop very well!
Overall great novel the only thing i don't like is giving jess too much screen time and importance................ ............... ............... ...............
Shameless Author review 5 star.Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed.Also thanks to the people that supported this. It is greatly appreciated.
A good novel and i hope i can read it more... Please dont drop this novel and keep it up your good work.. A novel that worthing to wait the update
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Not enough reviews for a rating... so i'll rate.Writing quality: No mistakes seen so far. The use of ancient chinese in the story throws me off at times simply because i forget and too lazy to check the aux chap. (Author has explained the meanings in a chap)Updates: The updates are stable. It's just not updated enough if you ask me. I want more but i don't want the quality to drop because of it. So i'll be content.Story: There is a lot of development and early on it might have been a bit annoying. (Cliffhanger on ML and the next week the chap is about FL so 2 weeks before we get back to ML) I hope that at the latest chap (of the time of this review) There wil not be too many shifts again.Char: They are well enough designed and interesting.Background: Everything is good.