What happend, Why did the chapter get removed?!
I think the novel has a lot of potential. The plot and world building seems to be unique and the characters are all thought out and have multiple layers to them and I hope the writer keeps it that way. The main issue would be the occasional punctuation/spelling mistake but that is a quick fix.
Tiene muy buena pinta, interesantes los primeros capiítulos
Review for fast pass. However this novel might be good. Who knows.
Interesting story so far with rather interesting premise. One that told in a different way that seems to be more character focused at the moment as might be a good things to build up the character first before explore other things about the world a0nd how it became that way in more detail
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OMG you are such an interesting writer. I'm proud of you girl ❤️
The characters and story are very well put together, shout out to the great author of this story. 10/10 best story I've read in a while.
Excellent work, first chapter got me hooked. Continue the good work Author!
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just here to review for a fastpass event
Our world.