"Muhahahaha! "
With that, the announcer declared the winner, "The winner of this match is Chore Boy---"
His father…in his memories, there was no such person to begin with.
a promising auther indeed ,l love the story .what l liked is that u came up with your own story it is defferent from other novels l have read .when reading other novels l feel like lam repeating the same novel coz they change the characters but the storyline would be the same .but yours story is different .looking forward to enjoy it
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I think the story is somewhat very not good
So far I really enjoyed this novel, the world is interresting and fun. Only the fights tend to dreg on and on, which can be boring.Overall pretty good novel.
I quite like it, it's a breath of fresh air compared to dragons previous books and the quality is much better than his previous 'Empire' books, I hope this continues to be translated/written until completion, it's a good snack between other books I'm reading at the same time ?
The cover page is nicely done, and the synopsis also. The story is interesting and your main character is expressive and has an intriguing personality and nicely written descriptions.Well done!
As far as novels on this site go, this one is a rough diamond. It's quality and storytelling are a step above many others. All the author needs is time and practice now... and potentially a mass edit once he becomes better at English.Here's my 5 star review, Author. Hopefully this will bring more readers. The rest is up to you.If you're looking to improve, I'd say you should work on "showing" instead of "telling." The early chapters offer a lot of in-depth insight into every character, but it interrupts their actions and hurts the smooth plot progression. It also makes the chapters seem shorter and uneventful. Instead, display their emotions through their actions, and their thoughts through their spoken words to other characters.I love what you are doing with the mute, slave-girl. Because she can't speak the characters have to get creative, meaning it's more fun to read. Plus, she's very mysterious so long as that communication and knowledge gap is maintained. I like it.Good luck.
So far i dont really have any suggestions. I just hope you dont drop the novel. As long as you keep the chapters come I'll keep supporting you. Thats all
It's good enough said.Stuff added for the stupid 140 character thing............................................. ............................................................1..1.1.1.1.1.1.1.1.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2..2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.2.1.1.1.1.1..11..1.1.1.1.1.1.1.2.2.2.2.