They have no tension because everything instantly resolves and you dont even get to relish a face slap before the story moves on to more non-problems.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Yes, there are minor errors but hey, it was a fun read. I quite enjoyed it actually. But as a reader what I can say is that I cant feel what the MC feels. I mean he felt like a stranger that just being gossip to me. Just that. I hope this will help and I'll keep updated! Adding it to my library. Let'skeep on improving?? nice idea btw. Every fan of this kind of genre would really enjoy it.
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The story is getting worse as the time goes by. Here are the idiotic things i have read so far.On the spot finger printing and checking without magnifying glass.. now thats got to be one of the most inefficient way to validate a person identity trying to enter and secured area.The Author just spent 13 chapters explaining how his brothel works. Author would sometimes spend 3 - 4 chapters on sexy time but spends 1 chapter on a battles that supposed to have happened in days.
I am still reading it but the plot development, pace, character buildup is very well written and i will read other works from this author too
I keep wanting more of the story with each chapter. And now this new development I hope Jackson gets her back or she finds a way to escape the darkness.
waiting for the next chapter
Mostly of their stories here nt finish. Anniying
please give us a lot more trappers than just one at a time thank you please