keep writing, this is actually very interesting and better than my rpg theme novel. I'm looking forward for more chapters, definitely gonna read this again, because I think I will learn a lot from your novel that can also improve my writing as well, kudos to you Author? you're novel is highly recommended
This novel, I was first drawn in by the cover and the synopsis of the story. To be honest, I was first hesitant to pick it up, due to the first sentence of the main character being betrayed, since I've been reading lots of betrayal tropes and I'm kinda sick of it by now, but I'm glad I decided to read it, also glad that Moulin isn't the kind of person who is 'I will never fall in love again after getting betrayed'.Ergh, Moulin, a goddess. Gorgeous, brave and lovable. Can I just say, after reading this I now want a snow wolf. It's so dang cute!The mystery, the magic, family love, the transmigrated MC who isn't as weak as they thought and the love interest. All of this contributes so much and makes this story even better! This is, also BL! which is a total plus! The plot is now kinda on a cliff hanger-ish, so there's not much I can say about it now except, I WANT MORE! I'm now on the verge of wanting to open up the author's brain to know what happens next.
Here is my thought about this book based on 1-10 chapters:World Building: The world building is good with the description of the high advance technology, planet craddle and the atmospjere of the world. The author also give the world situation too. I really like the mystery of the cube and I hope the author can fleshed out even more for that. I also like the first chapter set up the mystery of the shard.Characters: Elias for me is a quite good protagonist, but I suggest to flesh him out espefially related to his backgrpund and paat. A for the side characters such as Elara is nice with her role as the besr friend for the protagonist and the shard too.Pacing: Based on my experience, the pace is quite slow, but I believe rhe author wanted to create a neat build up that connected the story altogether.Overall, if you a fan of sci fi, I recommended to check this book.
This is a Thrilling book, the characters are well portrayed and the writing style is very good. I recommend it to everyone.
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Wow this is a very true novel with great characters lovely ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤?????????????????????????
just started reading this book now hope it's good .
My friend is writing the story. I can't believe that it's his 1st time writing a story. for real man, you're great. I mean it's not even your 1st language. Good job man.
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Nice story here, highly recommended, keep it up author
An interesting taking on the common reincarnation genre. The book excels at making entertaining twists while having a relatively quite original storyline. I enjoyed it.It also is nice in that it doesn’t have problems that other reincarnation novels have; the main character’s actions make sense considering his initial personality. They’re not a 100+ year old god that acts like a teenager the moment they’re reborn.Writing quality is also a big plus. Needless to say it’s pretty good, would be sad to see this story not finished or rushed.
while not many chapters are out, the plot seems interesting, will definitely keep reading this