I like it that all I got to say.
Great novel with a good plotline having a unique direction, looking forward to further interesting chapters .Not your usual system dependent novel.
Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel.Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel.The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity.The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember.Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing.The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel.If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.
The First 40 Chapters are too monotone. The MC is too hard headed with basically no character development. He just foolishly trying to cross floors with no focus on character. Lets just get through floors like its nothing.
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Love the world, keep up the good work!_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's a decent read so far. MC is a bit OP, but I haven't seen him do anything particularly foolish or self destructive yet, so he gets a pass for now.
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The book just started and I can already tell this is gonna be a fun read. I know it’s a bit premature to write a review when only a single chapter has been uploaded but I’m gonna do it anyway. Nothing more to say really, I’ll write a new review later on when more chapters are written.
I really wanted slime to be a human but he is still slime though atleast as far as I read. however simple wordings yet so clear like water. it is a good piece of work and i hope the Writer Maybe! continue uploading....as the story needs a satisfying end...lol it was gross for me to read cause i feel i have slime on my head. but ren reminds me of that jelly monster in candy crush that pink one....which is very annoying when we climb the bean tree....
The character's flat, the plot's as straight as highway through the prairie, the romance is bland, and the world building is a bad impressionist landscape with blobs of colours smeared to leave a distinctly vague idea of the subject of the painting.
I can't believe they took it off the trial and chose some other crappy novel. This is such a great novel I hope someone picks this up even if it's not Webnovel.