Wow !!! Amazing plot
title sound like a hallmark move ?
9 chapters 2-23-23
This book is simply amazing... Nadine's determination to find Dave no matter what is so beautiful. It was definitely worth my time.??
Keep writing ♡(> ਊ <)♡
160 chapters 3-28-23
after chapter 11 it changes to the middle of a whole different story. don't waste your time.
Love love love this story. A must read!! You will not be disappointed.
The book isn't terrible, but it's not exceptional either. It's a bit of a平淡 read. The concept of space and the post-apocalyptic background initially piqued my interest, but ultimately, I found it unfulfilling – a waste of my time. By chapter 500, the protagonist is still in the countryside, and the plot mainly revolves around her assisting others, which often feels overly sentimental. She comes across as a Mary Sue, almost always doing the right thing, but in a hypocritical manner. For instance, while she may act morally with her enemies, she fails to show empathy when her step-sister, a victim of abuse, appeals for help, instead criticizing her.
The story lacks depth and excitement. The lack of chemistry between the main characters is noticeable, and I didn't find any engaging moments between them. The pacing is slow due to numerous side characters and unnecessary scenes, which拖沓 the plot. Additionally, I was disappointed that the focus on their wealth accumulation was minimal. The protagonist's journey felt too easy, reinforcing the Mary Sue label.
The narrative is centered around the MC's acts of kindness, her work in a black market, encounters with annoying characters, and the transformation of the male lead from a cool individual to a clingy one. I originally intended to rate it a 2, but since I've completed it, I'll give it a 1 to avoid wasting my review.
In conclusion, the book is decent, but there are certainly better reads out there.
It's disheartening to see such an intriguing concept quickly fall apart. The progression is from a simple "gaining EXP through walking" premise to an obsession with forcing characters into convoluted emotional manipulation to "own" a newcomer."
The writing lacks finesse; it reads more like a journal, with poor narration and unclear dialogue, making it difficult to distinguish speakers. The main character's personality is inconsistent, ranging from kindness to cold-heartedness within minutes, with his assertiveness fluctuating unpredictably.
Side characters are either one-dimensional or underdeveloped, often disappearing after serving their purpose or suddenly declaring themselves the character's slaves. The protagonist's lack of trustworthy friends is glaringly apparent.
The plot is vague, focusing mainly on world travel, but encounters often suffer from poor writing. For instance, the MC gets falsely accused, but their innocence is conveniently cleared due to a coincidental connection. Demanding harsh consequences from a corrupt group, despite others' indifference, feels forced.
The story repeatedly resorts to slavery as a plot device, with every female character seemingly destined to become a slave, which is highly problematic. The lack of genuine relationships, like a love interest or trustworthy friends, is frustrating.
In conclusion, this is my last attempt at reading a story with any hint of slavery. The author consistently exploits this theme, turning every encounter into a forced servitude plot, which detracts from any potential for meaningful relationships or growth.
dual cultivaation
I read it about 260s and I was liking it but my only complain is that the mc is not fighting man... I believe I have waited enough the scamming, planning and all is fine but I want sone action, flaunting too... So I guess ima drop it. Can you guys recommend me a good novel with op mc and fast progression.