9 chapters in.... its pretty good. Like how open ended the world is and how vast it could turn out. It's pretty clear that this will be a long long story considering chapter length, synopsis, and the setting along with the world building thus far, looking forward for the rest
Over used story line making the beginning too soft the synopsis ain't attractive either and there hasn't really been any spark what so ever but not gonna lie your writing is good and there hasn't been any plot holes the system also seems chill as such I'll rate this a 4
"The answer is deaf people."
"Thinking".
I staring at Nurseperson, and he ignored me.
Her mother died when she gave birth to her. Her time in the Han family was not great, because of her low talent in cultivation her father almost ignores her. Although she was also his child and his only daughter, his father doesn't like her just because of her low talent. She one time heard his father said that if she just has a slight talent in cultivation, he can use her as a chip to form an alliance in other strong families by marrying her over. When she heard those words, she ran back to her room and cried alone. She knew she was just a tool in the family, everyone including her two older brothers bullies her. If not for her uncle's care and protection, she would have already killed herself.
Light Green
"I am sorry, I had a little argument with a rude guy. When he refused to leave and challenged me, I decided that he would be a good example for others. Just in case of future disobedience.
She could feel his eyes on her once in a while which made the tip of her ears turn red. She tried hard to ignore him but no avail. She turned around and caught his eyes staring right at her just as she thought.
Starting is nice
The ice we skate is getting pretty thin
And all that glitters is gold