Personally I'm a very fan of MC Lucas Monreau, the atmosphere around the work is magnificent.
I personally like this book as this develops my imagination
I found this was a pretty neat boom at first. Tried reading it, grammar isn't the best but it's understandable most of the time, not all the time. The plot seems to be extremely vague, MC's personality change between his death and reincarnation get glossed over, the interactions feel forced, fake, drawn out. the characters are pretty forgettable, and the 'emotional' moments just aren't. made it to chapter 26 until the story was completely lost on me. Stuff that seems like it should've been a big deal happened like it wasn't.
the best sports novel I ever read so far
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Hello, author here! I hope the readers enjoy this completed story of mine! It took a couple of months to finish it and with issues of writer's block with my other stories, I was able to finally complete this story in 2 Volumes, which was my goal for this novel! I hope everyone enjoys the main characters and the plot of the story!
Great story , I love the way you wrote the story and the plot is very interesting can't wait for more updates here's a 5 star for this Great story?
Is absolutely wank for the first 28-30 chapters and then gets a solid lead and is quite great after that. I would 100% recommend this book for y’all to read.
To be completely honest the Grammer and writing style is not very good. His sentences are very simplistic and he constantly switches between first person (I) and third person (He). This kind of sentence structure leads to a disjointed and jarring reading experience, making it hard to become immersed in the story he's trying to convey. That being said, at least the author seems to understand this as he tell us that English is not his native language in his synopsis. However, telling this to us up front doesn't make his novel any easier to read.Outside of the writing itself the main character is not very endearing and he constantly does stupid stuff that will make you angry. I can understand to an extent but he makes several large and avoidable mistakes that leaves me wondering if he even has a brain. In every other aspect hes kinda average without anything making him deep or complex. The same could be said about the plot and setting. It's not great but sometimes stuff happens out of freaking no where, leaving you frustrated. I do enjoy the gaming/leveling aspect of it though. I really like novels with these elements so it appeals to me more so than it might to others.Read this novel only if you can put up with the disjointed writing style, the dumba** mc, and if you don't have anything else to read. It would be a 3, or possiblly even 3.5 out of 5 stars had his English been better or the mc not being so stupid.
character is too emotional for my taste,got up to chap 79 and thought that he'll reflect on his past and calm down and says so but his actions speak louder the his words ironically.
I lost interest. Some stuff were just not being addressed and it leaves off in a unsatisfied way. The battles and fights were lacking dialogue. Not enough back to back confrontation with enemies and the lack of being on the edge my sit reading, it was really bland. Mc didn’t struggle; barely fighting the majority of what I’ve read and I’m at 137 chapters, too much dialogue and details on skills and books. I feel like what I was reading was good but majority of it was mediocre. it was trying to be really good but it just was lacking to me. And I get attached to characters so when he left the book or world he was in and I know for sure the characters there he was never gonna meet again is kinda sad. But I understand that’s the premise of the novel I expected to dislike that part of this novel when I came to read it. But I was expecting other things to be top notch. 7.5/10. Good luck author it was a decent read.